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I, Fool
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I have ransomed my hearts contentment for reason I, fool, thought correct. Allowed my heart to find soft sanctuary when I should have followed intent. Thus burdend with this hollow shell of blood, bone, morrow and distaste, I have now found myself anchored on naked shores that I have made. Yet my heart still beats its song of wonder lust from love you gave. And I, fool, should now see this wrong where my nights are lonely as yours. As simple surfaces of my soul torn apart, mend quickly with the love from your heart. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MG~ this is very VERY good!  I like it a lot! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a heart tis never foolish unless its loved in vain ... the love you held was precious otherwise it could not cause this pain. Still I bet you would not trade these tears ... for the special memories that you did gain ... nor would anyone whos loved, dare call you a fool ... for the traces that still remain. ******** you bleed and ache off the page in this Michael... we learn as we go baby ... we only lose ourselves when we stop trying. later my poet of heart gator me |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I gotta go with Jan on this one Michael. Although I know your heart will mend because a heart like yours is a rarity indeed. Hugs, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Michael I, fool, that I am, was held captive by this masterpiece until its last whispering breath. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
well said, it was beauiful What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A heart's content is never at peace Until true love returns to thee Tears may fall upon thy cheek Remembering times ago so sweet Then one morn the sun will beam It's warm embrace shall guide thee Towards a love of new beginning. hi MichaelG Just a quick note to let you know I read your poem and there's a verse that just pulled me right thru the screen... "As simple surfaces of my soul torn apart mend quickly with the love from your heart" Coco |
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