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choices that we make |
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Whisper Junior Member
since 2000-08-28
Posts 31 |
it's strange the paths our lives will follow the steps our feet will carry... the many moves, the odd events the choices that we make. what makes us do the things we do why do we take such care making sure that all is right never knowing why we're there. should we search our deepest thoughts find first the drive within or should we blindly lead our way to unforeseen begins. tis really strange how lives can change how fibers twist and turn the way we think of yesterday returns us back again. on and on our lives must go never ending at hard times but when the weary bones say stop is when we sigh goodbyes. why do we wait so long to tell to tell the love we feel expressed from heart to caring heart so often time won’t heal when just a simple thoughtful word just a loving phrase or two would mean so much to those that hear and carry their hearts on through on through the times that choices made see lives still old but new found in the heart with words of kind that grow from year to year. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Lovely words in a beautiful package. Well done. Dee |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Whisper- your words flow so smoothly - without the slightest jolt - they are a true treasure to read and need I say (I do not!) the message is one we can all take to heart. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah, i cant believe i almost missed this one! this poem rings so true.... i let my path carry me...and i try not to question its route too often...this is lovely. and such a lovely nickname you have as well! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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