Open Poetry #9 |
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The Coffin... (who knows more about terror than a witch? #3) |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69![]() |
The sky was dark and dreary, My legs were weak and weary, I was far from home that night, I fear was lost, my sorry plight. Then up ahead I spied a farm, Its warmth would save me from cold's harm, Into the barn with stealth I crept, Far worse places the night I've slept. I went to sleep in cattle's manger, Was unaware, impending danger, By loud banging, I was awoke, And then I saw, near had a stroke. From out the loft, a coffin loomed, I knew right then, my life was doomed. As coffin banged across the floor, I feared that soon, would be no more. I was so scared, out of my mind, When in my pocket I did find, A mentholyptus Luden's drop, Popped in my mouth to coffin stop. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One of my favorites of your funny ones, Mike! Thanks for the repost! Denise |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Wicked Witch of the East ![]() boy was I surprised. Good one. I liked it very much. Caught totally off guard with the ending. Garfield |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
lol .. nice twist W. Witch... thanks for taking the challenge.... watch for my new post ... "Evil Laughs" ![]() “The union of the mathematician with the poet, fervor with measure, passion with correctness, this surely is the ideal” |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Don't ya just hate it when you have a coffin fit????... ![]() |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LOL...you got me good on this one!! Great work...I love a smile at the end.. ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wicked-Wicked-Wicked~ I was sucreted right in ! ![]() ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Wicked Witch, I guess all good horror stories have a twist, I just wasn't expecting to be laughing at the end. Loved it. Dee |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I had a feelin' you were a~luden to a~coffin! ![]() |
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