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Toader and the Gang (fun with Atari!!)
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Toader and the Gang (fun with Atari!!) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Toader Down the middlemost middle the road Hops Harriet the hideous toad She gave up her cushy ole pad She's half 'cross the street, she's glad Squished by a heavy duty loader A game for frogs; nobody toader Un-pack-man He does the unpacking himself Loads the closets; fills the shelf He's in search of Miss. Un-Pack-Man His Web friend is BRB man. Unpackman eats his opressors Then he unpacks the triple dressers Face Invaders Zit Zit Zit Zit Why won't they ever quit Kill them but they'll be back again Zit Zit Zit Zit How can you ever win? Scent-o-Weed The mushrooms keep changing hues I shoot them down as I choose But here comes the scent-o-weed One sniff baby's all I need The scent-o-weed it has got me Look how much a quarter's bought me Wrong! Back and forth, back and forth We like to shout, "Hey you're wrong!" Back and forth, back and forth We can't keep this up for long Wrong's where it started indeed Two paddles are what we need! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 LOL Walt! Well done! For some bizarre reason ... I like this one the best! "A game for frogs; nobody toader"  Thanks for the smiles always Walt, best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx kit i'm glad you got the lil joke there... i'm partial to the paddles ...bumpin this up to see if anyone else would like to read it yuh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WaaaaaaayOuuuuuuuutWaaaaaaaalt ! You are zany ... and it's infectious ! I like the paddles too ! Oops ! Wrong ! If I toad you I like it then I'd have to Zit you ! I'm just gonna go Unpack, Man! But no matter how hard you try I ain't sniffing those mushrooms ! ~*WayOutWanda*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I LOVE THIS!!! Can I say I wrote it??? Huh? Huh? Huh? Pleeeeeeeeeezzzzzz? |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Right on! Wayout Great job! Fun to read and the games were fun too! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx guys next is hemmeroids and whatever else i can think of yuh yuh |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Walt, oh man how I miss your zany side. Played Atari for I don't know how many years. Adventure was the first game I actually owned. Way coolies, WoW!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Walt, you're like a breath of fresh hair!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Walt* You gave me a smile yuh! Sent of weed...ROFL!! One cool kid of the 80's...lol |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you guys o yuh its bows and curtsies or courtesy bows i dunno gratsy grawtsy? yuh thanks! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
'Deer' (ahem) HAIR BALL! Walt ROFL!! Atari?? Super, and N64 man! 007...pokemon snap LOL I love pac-man! That was one of the first games I started playing. Well actually Ms. Pac-man! Woohoo! I loved this one walt-a-roo!!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Waltieee, This is Great! hehehe Pac-Man brought back memories, loved it sooo much. Thanks my friend! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx dove and dark i played dark dove once |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Fantastic poem this one... Walt, your writing skills are amazing and your words are graceful.... regards, Sudhir... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Great writing Walt. It brought back some memories. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Walt, I'm so glad I saved this one for now... Came in handy on a blue Monday...thanks so for the smiles. |
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