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I Listened to Koln
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I Listened to Koln |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I Listened to KolnI listened to Koln tonight. The waves pummeled and crushed, rhythm rushed to light against me, as if I were at the carriage house still wrapped tight in a blanket of you, night's cinnamon sadness pouring, liquid madness, through seering sun into late fall light. I listened to Koln tonight and remained somehow unfrightened, upright, as I had yet to do. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"night's cinnamon sadness pouring, liquid madness, through seering sun into late fall light." -- Stunning words my friend! You create such unique images with all your work. I stand in awe yet again.  *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Stunning, indeed! Another masterpiece, Claire! Denise |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Claire- I've no Knowledge of Koln at all - but after reading this and Especially "as if I were at the carriage house still wrapped tight in a blanket of you" You may try to call me flattered again - but may I remind you - "flattery is insincere' and my words are not as I recall my last reply to you. (I will hear Koln) ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder ~ wilfredyeats@hotmail.com [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I felt like I was falling as I was reading this....great job girl! ~Heather |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
'tis so easy to visualize Claire, for we have all at one time or another enwrapped ourselved in a special music that allows us to be transported, or even protected within in its notes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Awesome fits, yes, awesome is the correct word... |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Claire, "wrapped tight in a blanket of you"... Wonderful use of imagery, dear friend. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Would you be speaking of "The Koln Concert" by the pianist Keith Jarrett?? That's the first thing that I thought of when I read the title. . . and as I read the poem, I thought about it more and more. . . Just amazing Claire. . . simply amazing. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thanks everyone, for reading. I'm glad there was a little bit of this piece that made sense to someone! (besides me) Sven, that is the exact piece of music I am referring to...isn't it magical? It is very special to me. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Claire, I'm still finding something in this That fascinates me. It's so different from what you usually write. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Simply stunning Claire... it really really is. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Indeed it is Claire. . . and I'm glad that I was right. . . must remember to pick that up again since I have lost my copy of it! Thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Michael, it is true, this is a bit different from my usual poetic offerings. As you know, I prefer writing in classic meter and rhyme, but am tempted, now and again, to try my hand in free verse. Who knows? Maybe if I keep trying, I'll eventually get it right. Thanks, dear. Severn, I thank you, in earnest, for the sweet words you left for me, and am pleased that you found this to be something you enjoyed reading. Sven, oh yes, do find another copy, and feel it, my friend. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Claire, This is most wonderful writing from you, my friend regards sudhir |
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