Open Poetry #9 |
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Your Words....3 |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa ![]() |
The words repeated in my head I had been practicing for days And yet these words could not be said Lost among my hearts delays. The silence fell on both our ears Why did you still seem so content? Struggling just to face my fears It seemed like hours came and went. When somehow in your gazing eyes Amiss my most unveiling hour I felt an inner passion rise And granted on myself the power To tell you everything I felt You smiled at me and brought me near I kissed your lips and felt mine melt, As you whispered in my ear. Your softly spoken loving words Were the sweetest sounding ever said, And ever since the day I heard, Your words repeated in my head. I love you. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Kevin, a very beautiful poem. Whom ever it is written for is a very lucky lady. Dee |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ This is so softly loving. Where hope buds ... there blossoms a flower. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of Love and caring and sincerity in this poem...I loved reading this...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A very lucky lady indeed! A poet and a warm heart......what lady could ask for more!! ![]() Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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