»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
Precious Light
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
Precious Light |
|
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Precious Light Love does not exist. Perhaps that's the way that you feel. A husband.. A marriage... and remnants of Love lost in the deal. The calmness of this world now crumbling apart.. Stress arriving each day to torment a fresh broken heart. Your slice of once a good life replaced now with endless strife. Questioning did he ever love you. Was his devotion kind but untrue. Look on the blessings... you still have your lovely daughter with you. She needs your love even more today and she'll always Love you. Life will go on day by day and night by night. And someday not so far away your heart will overcome this darkness and walk anew in the light. I can't take the pain away still I wanted to take the time to say I understand the pain you are feeling today. It happened to me when my wife walked away. The circumstances not exactly the same on that day but the pain and sorrow was delivered to me exactly the same way. And time did pass and take my sorrow away and I can cleary see that precious light today. Jameslee@September04,2000 formyfriendMina. [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-04-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved | |||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Always nice to let a friend know we're there. A hug, a prayer and a sincere showing of compassion often means the world to those in emotional pain. Nicely stated. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is sweetly beautiful, thoughtful, and touching...wow! I like the way it just "flowed" down the page...great format! As always, your words are a delight straight from your heart. So glad you shared this delicate piece with us...it's always hard, this type of situation. Bravo! |
||
|
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Your friend is so lucky to have your support, I hope in time she's ok. By the way, loved the poem. Dee |
||
|
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Once again your heart in pen... I read this poem and believe me when I say to you that thru your words you indeed touchNinspire others...  Coco "There are 26 letters in the alphabet and from those letters anyone can have the world at their fingertips..." |
||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
jmlee... Your friend is very lucky to have the support of one with such a caring heart. This was a tender piece, and it's good to know there are still folks in this world who care about each other!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bravo sir. Your friend is one lucky person indeed. I loved this poem of yours not only in style and flow but in its sincerity. Great one my friend. |
||
|
Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
James ~ All of your friends are very lucky to know you, as you put aside and share your pains in a most caring and positive way.. kindness becomes you well... SB“The union of the mathematician with the poet, fervor with measure, passion with correctness, this surely is the ideal” |
||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Again you have me in awe my friend. You truly wear your heart on your sleeve. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for your lovely responses...James |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, you have such a caring heart and compassion, which you express beautifully. This is a great, a magnificent poem. Your friend is very lucky to have you in their corner. Take care of the light and the light will shine on. |
||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James my special friend...she will know and so will you |
||
|
Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was very sweet and filled with hope. I loved your flow and style in this...a very good read......... Jenn E |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marsha, Paula, and Jenn for the nice comments..I appreciate you taking the time to read this..James |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
