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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-09-03 09:48 AM

The beauty of each other

ALONE
A man and a woman
unable to resist
the disappointed feeling
that Love does not exist.

UNTIL two friends take the time
to gaze into each others eyes
perhaps looking for a reason
to spend some time together
in an evening in July.

THEY KISS IN SWEET ROMANTIC BLISS
awakened feelings now aware
tis longing living in each kiss
gently stirring up feelings desirous
to be intimately shared...

AND EAGERLY DISCOVER THE BEAUTY OF EACH OTHER
twas only sweet romance sharing it's magic
with two brand new passionate lovers.
Two lovers never to question
the bliss that love is so good at revealing.
Two lovers only desiring a fresh stirring
of the happiness and fulfillment they are feeling.

Jameslee@September03,2000

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-03-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-03 10:07 AM

The best and strongest loves always start in friendship and grow from there. Lovely verse and I am glad to have seen one of yours today. I dont know if I have been missing them or if you have been gone but either way I am glad to have found this one.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-09-03 10:24 AM

James~
Nicely said - romantically penned.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2000-09-03 10:42 AM

Good morning James,
Oh James, you do have the romantic touch. You write, the pen flows, and the woman you know, how can they resist you?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-09-03 05:30 PM

Thank you Mark, Marge, and Bill for the wonderful responses.
Bill the woman I know seem to be very adapt at the art of resisting me...perhaps I haven't met the right one...my friends tell me the secret is to relax and have fun...lose my desperation...James

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2000-09-04 03:14 AM

hi James,

Well I read this one twice over and I compliment you on the expression you've penned...

"until 2 friends take the time to gaze into each other's eyes; perhaps looking for a reason to spend some time together.."

These particular verses make me smile...

Coco

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-09-05 04:03 PM

Thanks Coco...I'm happy to make you smile...now I'm smiling also...James

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2000-09-05 04:10 PM

James* This is fantastic...your pen was
dipped into your heart when you wrote and it
showed with the beauty you write of...and
the woman that receives all this and
more...well make sure she stops by Passions
because I want to tell her how lucky she is!!

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

8 posted 2000-09-05 04:58 PM

"UNTIL two friends take the time
to gaze into each others eyes"

James, this pretty poem of new awareness has really touched me today. Such lovely thoughts, my friend.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2000-09-05 06:22 PM

James, this is a fantastic poem, your writing is truly inspired. I love this, and I hope the end result is bliss. I think the reason you write so well is that you write exactly what you feel. The only true way to write of course, but it's a fact that escapes some. Take care, and thanks for writing this poem.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2000-09-05 08:47 PM

James...this is just what I needed to read right now...thank you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2000-09-21 04:07 PM

Thank you Butterfly, Claire, Marsha and Paula for the wonderful comments...James

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