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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sarah You were but a whisper in your mother's arms you grew into the child I would keep from harm you were to be a Queen upon a covenant Sarah, you were to be the one I was meant to protect Sarah can you be my dream after all these centuries can you be the one in my reveries should you know my face will it then be known you were always in my heart for you I'll always roam Sarah Sarah the name of my heart Sarah, Sarah I've now come apart you were but a whisper you were to be a Queen you were to be the one for you I'll always dream… Sarah……. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 2 September, 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine Wow (whispered softly) WOW! (shouted out loud)Amazing! Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry thank you... |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Sunshine - This is a poem every mother has to love - changing only the name for their own personal reverie...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Nan...my brother is looking for some lyrics and I was thinking of sending this to him... |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Such haunting lyrics....very enjoyable! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
you were but a whisper you were to be a Queen you were to be the one for you I'll always dream… Sarah……. This one just slides off the screen in a whisper like the breeze through the branches, beautiful and haunting. Sit down and bargain "Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have stretched and grown into this heart many times in your poetry but with this you have reached and allowed me to touch your words. Great write from one of the best. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exceptional ... Karilea, this is most beautiful work... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
English Rose, and gentle men...thank you all very much... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sunshine, this is, indeed, a song of the heart, and its music is tender and timeless. Absolutely captivating. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very nice poem!!!!!!!!  |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunshine-A beautiful tender tribute of a mothers pride from your heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Claire, timeless works...thank you... Thank you Vandana... Thank you, Gemini... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You touch tender with this lovely piece of your heart. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
The best of everything always comes from the heart. Dee |
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