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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-09-03 12:31 PM


You Are

As the sunset covers my world
and the darkness begins to fall
My life is still full of colors
You are in my Heart.

Cold winds may chill my bones
Rain can dampen my skin
Warm and dry I remain
You are in my Soul.

Though we are Miles apart
and the road my seem to long
I still can touch you
You are in my Dreams.

Each night when we meet
brings as closer to the day
When we stand face to face
You are in my Arms.


9-02-00



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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2000-09-03 02:50 AM


KitKat~

'As the sunset covers my world
and the darkness begins to fall
My life is still full of colors
You are in my Heart.'


Oh, what a lovely thought.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-09-03 03:22 AM


KitKat,
and you are standing high in my esteem with this piece. Amazing.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-09-03 11:02 AM


This is lovely without being overly sentimental. It's inspirational without preaching. It's colorful without being drenched in imagery. It's beautiful in it's simplicity...


Kathleen


Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-03 11:15 AM


Very beautiful and very loving.  Love this much.
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2000-09-03 11:42 AM


Good morning kitkat,
What precious thoughts you write. Very loving and very thoughtful.

kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
6 posted 2000-09-03 08:50 PM


Thank-you all for your replies.
Marge- Love is very Colorful

Kethry-Thanks for the compliment

Irish Rose-Sometimes short a brief says it all

Mark-He makes me feel beutiful and Loved

Bill-I do have loving thoughts of him

Soon we will be face to face again *sighs*

rosepetals25
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7 posted 2000-09-03 09:17 PM


KitKat,
  
   Ohhh.. this one did touch my heart.  My boyfriend who I love sooo much was suppose to come up this weekend (he lives in the state below me at the moment, but due to certain circumstances.. he couldn't.  I think I am going to send him this poem.. I know he feels the same way. I'm so glad I stopped in  

                         rp25

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2000-09-03 11:14 PM



Such a touching and devoted poem this is.  Isn't it amazing how one person can have such a power over your soul.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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