Open Poetry #9 |
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You Are |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia ![]() |
You Are As the sunset covers my world and the darkness begins to fall My life is still full of colors You are in my Heart. Cold winds may chill my bones Rain can dampen my skin Warm and dry I remain You are in my Soul. Though we are Miles apart and the road my seem to long I still can touch you You are in my Dreams. Each night when we meet brings as closer to the day When we stand face to face You are in my Arms. 9-02-00 -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ 'As the sunset covers my world and the darkness begins to fall My life is still full of colors You are in my Heart.' Oh, what a lovely thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
KitKat, and you are standing high in my esteem with this piece. Amazing. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely without being overly sentimental. It's inspirational without preaching. It's colorful without being drenched in imagery. It's beautiful in it's simplicity... Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful and very loving. Love this much. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning kitkat, What precious thoughts you write. Very loving and very thoughtful. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thank-you all for your replies. Marge- Love is very Colorful Kethry-Thanks for the compliment Irish Rose-Sometimes short a brief says it all Mark-He makes me feel beutiful and Loved Bill-I do have loving thoughts of him Soon we will be face to face again *sighs* |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
KitKat, Ohhh.. this one did touch my heart. My boyfriend who I love sooo much was suppose to come up this weekend (he lives in the state below me at the moment, but due to certain circumstances.. he couldn't. I think I am going to send him this poem.. I know he feels the same way. I'm so glad I stopped in ![]() rp25 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Such a touching and devoted poem this is. Isn't it amazing how one person can have such a power over your soul. Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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