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topnotch707 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16vallejo, cali, usa |
Even though we're apart I still have you in my heart. The love is there to stay Every night and every day. Even though we cannot touch I want you to know that I love you so much. I think of you all the time and I thank God you're mine. Even though it'll be a while before I see your smile. You'll be in my heart for eternity I can't wait 'til you're here with me. Even though we can't speak the thoughts of you make me weak. There's no words to express our love and happiness. Even though your not here with me our love will always be. I can't wait 'til you're with me again We'll be together 'til the end. - Rebecca Vieu (C) This poem was written to the love of my life Hassan Ali. Whom I will never give up on no matter what " I love you Hassan " |
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sosweet82 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 17Phoenix, AZ |
You sound as if you are truely in love. That was very moving. I hope that you get everything that you want in the end!!!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was certainly a heartfelt poem! Shows much love for this one! Enjoyed it. <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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