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Dinner With deVine
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Dinner With deVine |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
his hands brown and strong her hands thin nails too long one touch first night jitters he smiles she titters soft glances across the wine he whispers ‘nice to meet you deVine” she grins eyes aglow you’re the only I wanted to know dinner eaten talk flows free tell me, he asks what did you see in me “Your gentle way your smile sweet but most of all the size of your feet!” |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I do love your sentimental side!!! ROFL... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wonder. . . what wine goes with big feet?? LOL  ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Here we go so romantic and wham! Ya' come on with the twist! Now everyone start singing...let's do the twist....c'mon baby, let's do the twist.  Oops sorry got away from myself there  LOL great one Devine! <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ladies! Thank you for your reply. Sven..you forgot to tell me what size shoe you wear!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
OH!! Ok. . . um. . . sorry. . . It's only a 9 1/2. . . but I have wide feet!! LOL Does that help??------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
I love this! Thanks for sharing the smiles!!!Gossamerwings |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i've always acted my shoe size it didnt catch up to me till i was 13 yuh! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Poet deVine- I love this! Very simple. Both romantic and fun.  Thanks for sharing this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ROFL Sharon, you devil you! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
C'mon guys! Where are those shoe sizes? (How do you know I'm not sending you all socks for Christmas?)  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well, Poet deVine, I have heard about rumours linking shoe sizes to ... ( shut up, sudhir ) ... anyway, had fun reading this... regards, sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So.... You've been doing your laundry at Doreen's house? ...and you're the culprit who's got all the mates to her socks??? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You little minx Sharon....  ROFL@Nan and mates.... HUSG |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
PDV , Excellent ! Hope you saved room for desert ! Doc |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
LOL! Very good and very funny...I think (my shoe size is just a 9...but I do have very wide feet also) It's good to meet you in here as well as in the Adult Forum. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Ms deVine, this is GREAT! starts of nice and romantic and then BANG! Loved the twist at the end |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
some say the shoe size of a man doesn't really matter but you and i know differently when dinner's on a platter some say it's insignificant it's not the size, it's the walk... but i say what those people say is just a bunch of talk i think it's clever, ms. devine, the way you phrased this question!! i'll check back here for size of shoes... and read with some discretion... *wink*  [This message has been edited by pandora (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Socks, aye? 11EE Intriguing little verse...thank you for the smile it brought as well as the arched brow...and speacking of which....for the socks, of course...can you find something that has really supple arching support? Evan |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
You got me again.... Once more and I am going to reach across the net with an island size hand and give you a spanking,,,,rofl Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So this is romance with thoughts of.......Lust?lol You got me on it too and I have to admire your wit.(size 12 EE). Wonderful and fun write. Now off I go to polish my boots. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sharon! Make it easy on yourself and get socks that are "one size fits all..." Then you don't have to worry about 'Deer's hooves and LJA's paddleboats... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Did I get pulled into that one! Hook, line and sneaker! Geez 10 1/2, btw. But if the light is just right and the wine flows freely, they can be mistaken for clown shoes! Still chuckling... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Good one Sharon! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Walt – Age 13? So do you mean your shoe size is a 5? Viraynes – thanks, it was fun to write! Chris – it takes one to know one! Sudhir – linking shoes sizes to ‘engine power’ Nan – I don’t steal another woman’s socks RG – Giggles! Dr. – Dessert? Yep, shoefly pie! Notlikely2 – don’t tell them what we talk about in Adult or we’ll be overrun! DA – I always like a twisted end Pandora – To confess the size of his feet Each poet must repeat Size doesn’t matter ‘less you’re the batter! EW – Supple socks as opposed to stiff ones? Prometheus – The lesson that you want to teach Is somewhat beyond my reach So should I say that I love A man who wears a really big glove? Mark – Boots? I love boots! Karilea = One size fits all Is a single girl’s lament The last one-sized Ended up in cement! Trew – Clown shoes get extra points with me as long as the ‘nose glows’ Kit – thanks!! We needs smiles sometimes! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
deVine one, it might 'be-hoove" to take on a 'deer! I have 2 feet, by the way |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ You be the left foot I'll be the right Together we'll make quite a pair Neither of us knowing where the other one is going Just how will we ever get there ???? Oh .... that does it for my blonde moment ! I own up to having an 'ever so slight' shoe fetish ... but hey ... even Cinderella has to keep trying on those slippers ! ! Thanks for the chuckle. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
LMAO.....love this one deVine!!! Hope those feet are huge!!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Angel Sighs And Smiles Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 16 |
Very unexpected ending!! Super hilarious! Feet are always the first thing that I check out!!!!!! LOL |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL....needed that laugh today hon, thanks |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
LOL.....you crack me up, Sharon! This is great! Denise |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
well, you sucked us all in for that one, PDV ... well done ... superb ending ... LOL |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SO???? Did I win?? What's my prize?? Is this anything like "My Dinner with Andre"? ROFL --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LOL......only you PoetD... my mind was still on a very old challenge in adult...shame on me...lol |
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