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The Romantic Sea
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The Romantic Sea |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
Love is like a Romantic Sea, rushing to meet the shore, embracing the moment they touch, holding on and wanting more. The waves get more passionate, with each carressing touch that is made, creating a togetherness that nothing else can invade. The Seagulls serenade, with their beautiful song, giving the feel that everything is wonderful and nothing could possibly go wrong. When the Seagulls sing and the waves and shores meet, the romantic dance they perform, makes this scenario complete. all Rights Reserved Diane Y. Wood 8-25-2000 (C)Copyright 2000 When you can't say it in words, write it in poetry. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful. Welcome to Passions and by the looks of it you are going to be a good one to read. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I loved this lines. When the Seagulls sing and the waves and shores meet, the romantic dance they perform, makes this scenario complete. Great work.  Welcome friend.Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I've read ...and written ... countless poems of the shore -none that I've read ...none that I've written - are superior to this - ..well done |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
******Mark****** Thank you for your wonderful comments, you made me feel really good.Hope I can live up to your expectations. Diane *****Xeonox******** Thank You, so much. I'm not sure where this poem came from other than I was looking at a picture of a seashore and the words started flowing in my mind. Diane *****Wilfred****** Your Comments I will take as quite a honor you know how to make a person feel great. Hugs Diane Thank All of you for the Welcome. Love and Light to All Diane When you can't say it in words, write it in poetry. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Welcome tp passions... This is good work... well done! If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I like this muchly! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I like your style of writing and how you've penned expression together... "holding on and wanting more" this verse says it all don't ya think... Coco |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
How romantic this poem is...it is very soft and so captivating. Well done!! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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American Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-21
Posts 49USA |
Ohhhh! Gave me goosebumps! Very well done.. welcome! American Princess It's only me, thinking out loud... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Diane~ You captured a thought that has always fascinated me ... the sea continually hugging the shore. No matter what ... she returns and lays her moisture over the land ... wiping the slate clean for new footprints to be imprinted tomorrow. I LOVED the very idea of it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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