»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
saint 'n lov with a sinner
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
saint 'n lov with a sinner |
|
|
chinaman Junior Member
since 2000-08-26
Posts 17 |
The child in me saw your sinful ways I've lost in love but never loose this wonderful lesson You're a ghost in disguise ruining the tenderness in everyone You crave for attention and attraction which I've given you all along even nothing returned I loved you with all my might never realizing it would be a mighty blow Love is a 2 way street which involves give and take I'd die ultimately loving you and I'm sure of that Death suffered from treachery of your evil ways |
||
| © Copyright 2000 chinaman - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Chinaman, Yes love can be treacherous, but it can also be an uplifting experience. I heard your poem and felt it deep inside. Take care Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions! You'll find inspiration, courteous people and a wealth of feelings and emotions here. Good to have you. Kathleen |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
