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Diane Yvonne
Junior Member

since 2000-08-22

Posts 36
Camdenton,Mo. USA

0 posted 2000-09-01 07:10 AM

When Love Comes Calling, You Better Answer The Door,
Or Otherwise You May Never Find What You Have Been
Looking For.

There Will Be Many That Love You, Or So They Proclaim, But After A Few Dates, You Don't Even
Want To Remember Their Names.

You Must Be Careful When Love Comes Calling, It May
Not Be What It Seems, It May Be Someone With a Scheme.

Someone That Says They Love You, Til The Going Gets
Rough, They Will Up And Leave You, Saying Sometimes
Life Is Tough.

Then There Is the Love That Calls, That Is Everything The Universe Will Allow, It's a Love That
Once You've Had, You don't Know How To Live Without.

So When Love Comes Calling, You Must Answer Your Door, You never Know What Life Has in Store.
There May Be Good, There May Be Bad, But In Order
To Appreciate The Fulfilling Love, you Will Have
To Experience The Dance.

Diane Yvonne

When you can't say it in
words, write it in poetry.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-09-01 07:20 AM

I experienced your dance so poetically in this piece.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-09-03 11:12 AM

This was an effective piece, can I make a suggestion? Maybe drop the capital letters and put it in a four-line format? I'd hate to see the meaning get lost, you have a lot to say, keep writing!!!!

Kathleen

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2000-09-03 11:35 AM

Good morning Dianne,
Very nicely done, and I'm glad that I stopped in for a read.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2000-09-03 05:36 PM

Welcome to passions!!!!!Nicely done.

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

5 posted 2000-09-03 06:07 PM

Oh yes...I know all about the love that wants an out when things get tough!!!!
A very true, and very nice read

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-09-03 07:00 PM

So true and so nicely expressed...James

Diane Yvonne
Junior Member

since 2000-08-22

Posts 36
Camdenton,Mo. USA

7 posted 2000-09-04 03:33 AM

Thanks Everyone for your nice comments,

Irish Rose, Thanks for your suggestions, I
am new to writing so I am still learning about proper formats, I will keep what you
said in mind.

Diane

When you can't say it in
words, write it in poetry.

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

8 posted 2000-09-04 03:38 AM

~Diane,
I knew this was to be a great
read. Thanks for sharing.
Beth~

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