Open Poetry #9 |
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My Fragil Heart |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
My heart is so fragil, please handle with care, treat it like it is a precious gem stone, that is so very rare. Please hold it and cherish it till the end of time, because I gave it to you, when I knew you were mine. Things have happened, when it was left in your care, now it's in need of major repair. I know you can do it with just a little care, replenish the luster that we once shared. But while my heart is on the mend, Please be kind with it, and keep trying to show me, how much you love it again. It will respond to your loving ways, but Please be gentle, it's in a fragil state. I love you more than life itself,but I won't be able to stand, being set aside somewhere on a shelf. I've tried to prove my love to you, and this I think you know, so Please be kind to my fragil heart because it still loves you so. All Rights Reserved Diane Yvonne Wood 9-1-2000 (C)Copyright 2000 When you can't say it in words, write it in poetry. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such a fragile heart - and we all have the same affliction - should indeed be handled with care - You've expressed your sentiments nicely, Diane... ![]() |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Diane, I do believe this is the first one of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading. So, "Hello!" to you and might I say that this is a beautiful poem. I would have to echo Nan's sentiments. Each heart is indeed fragile. You speak for yourself and for us all! Trev. [This message has been edited by Trew (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
To recapture a love you know to be true Can be the hardest test upon your heart To love and to trust is all that you can do As you find that place where again you start Wonderful write and spoken from the heart. |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
Thanks Nan for your comments,the Heart is always fragil but there are times it becomes more so than others. Thanks Trew for your comments and hello back. I think this is my 4th poem that I have Posted here on Passions but I will be posting here more as time allows. Mark Thank you for your poetic comment, the love is there it's the trust I seem to have the problem with hopefully time will also heal that pain. Diane Yvonne When you can't say it in words, write it in poetry. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Diane, This was written well.. Hope to see more of you here. Beth~ |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
Thank You Beth, I really Like Passions Forum I will be posting here as much as I can. I am trying to get past a very difficult time in my life and not being on the computer all the time will help, although the people here helped me very much last weekend in my darkest hours and I am So grateful to everyone for being here . God Bless all of you. Diane When you can't say it in words, write it in poetry. |
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