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Open Poetry #9

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-09-01 03:52 AM

Her tears rip my soul
and fire my hearts breath
no single word or thought
can make these leave.
Life is funny at times
withering our resolve
when we wish conclusions
could rally to heal us all.
Of those times that were shared
we fell into a state of grace
under your duvet, our world
that we both used to escape.
Then frightend of purpose
we run from what we see
two hearts that have opend
and the chances of being.
Now we curse our weakness
as we find our strength late
and run tears over our wounds
that capture our lost fate.
And I to wonder futures
of what will become
and pray to God's reliance
to help us in our song.
Of one day seeing you
across the way from me
to race into your arms
and hold you for a dream.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-09-01 12:26 PM

Wow..this is powerful! I love it.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-09-01 12:34 PM

This is quite magical. This is just a lovely piece of writing my friend.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-09-01 12:44 PM

Your words our a true reflection of your heart Michael, as always.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2000-09-01 12:47 PM

this is enchanting...hope just flows through it from start to finish

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-01 10:51 PM

This is so heart felt......acutely felt by this reader. I don't think there would be a day one would read your words and not be completly amazed at the amount of purness that is held in your heart and soul. A very honest heart........
As Always
Jenn E

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