Open Poetry #9 |
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truth forever ... |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
truth forever ... the face of truth wears no mask one look into its eyes reveals all mirrored reflections blur to compare truth is always there in the end-game manipulated truth fangs with ripe venom the sting deepens with time's wilting suckle upon the open wound and spew out comes the healing truth once more run fast as wind's heated breath still no escape from a lie's swift catch black widow web snares another meal the truth comes back to feast again holding on to the black cape of deceit a blackened heart festers with stench how deep and dark the hurt must go truth will lighten the load's weight a love lost to another's gentle hold live the dark lies never to be told keep alive in the back of your mind truth lives forever, always to find M.A. Miller 08.28.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very nicely expressed MA---and the timing of the piece was exquisite as well...smiles to ya and welcome back! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...this is so dark and hurtful...so sad |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
What a well written poem, beautifully presented, and perfectly phrased. Paints a picture and paints it very well! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Really nice to have you back among us. This was a very powerful read. welldone sir. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
MA, this is excellently expressed... glad to see that you are enjoying it out here... regards, sudhir |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks to all above ... nice to be back after some severe computer problems ... thanks again for reading. |
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