Of memories in ink- a song

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-09-01 01:47 PM

Another pin prick
on the back of my shoulder
just like the one
thats on my arm
an injection of the ink
that pauses my mind to think
of a time I want to remember
and the hope of days I can never forget
those summer times that breach my heart
collapse to you within my arms.

Another story told upon my soul
that whispers love, takes control
which silence could never take
my hearts rythm to your pace
the pain of the pin is here
giving me life for my lost fear
changing the skin to reflect this past
and make it live until I die
of hearts beating moment
that we wil always share.

Another change of my hair color
shocking white like the paper
which I bear my soul to the world
allowing all to ridicule
to see my green eyes fade today
to be reborn another way
and finding that my strength
is still deep inside
and hoping you will never go
for as souls we are still one.

Another pin prick
on the back of my shoulder
that grants me peace
and the nights of wonder
of a ying and yang
that gets ripped through
by a claw of bear
that reminds me of you
of all that we have shared
and all that we may still care.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-09-01 01:53 PM

A tattoo on the heart...lovely write here Michael

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-09-01 01:56 PM

Oh, Michael G, you have done it once more...taken your beautiful words and painted pictures of love in my mind..........
I am a fan.........

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-09-01 03:01 PM

Very wonderful. Your pen paints well at the fingertips of your muse. The imagery is outstanding all the way through and the sentiment is one to cherish.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2000-09-01 03:20 PM

I agree with all, Michael. This is excellent work...

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-09-01 03:26 PM

A very powerful but yet gentle message in this Michael. Your choice of words and how they flow from your pen is simply amazing.

Bleach blonde hair and green eyes?? Most be from Cali !!!!

Go leafs Go!!!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

6 posted 2000-09-01 10:45 PM

You sure have a soft gentle way of easing a womans sadness.....this was beautiful, reflects all one needs to know.......for some things shall never end.....Your words are like a hot bath.........soothes all the aches and pains away. Thank You.
As Always
Jenn E

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