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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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You there, come here, smile-- dance with me... You, so far, over there, miles of glance 'tween you and me... Inhale...take you breath of me... dive now in to depth of sea... be bold to stare my need of eyes... believe, belief, of love's surprise. I would spin in pirouette... perfect poise to smile regret... Easy dance though feet deceive... easy light of redefine-- mercy begged to be received... Easy lie to call you mine. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
serenity~ Just point me to where the dance is, and promise me you'll at least save one for me!!!  Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"Easy lie to call you mine." Whoa! something about these lines really gets me... did i write this?????? nice one, serenity |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Grrrrreeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaattttttttt work O serene One regards, sudhir |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hi serenity ... this is a different approach for you ... i didn't follow it at first, but a second read brought clarity ... i like the style ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I would spin in pirouette... perfect poise to smile regret... Easy dance though feet deceive... easy light of redefine-- mercy begged to be received... Easy lie to call you mine. ======================== *sigh* but i do so love the easy lie .... poetically speaking...  but then you already knew that.. *winkie winkie*.... blowing kisses to the south... love ya me |
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