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Memories Clouded In Lust
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Memories Clouded In Lust |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Memories Clouded in Lust-------my song to you (softly spoken) My love , I just wanted you to know. I have dreamed of our love since the beginning of time and wish to create memories that will last a lifetime. So please..........(music starts)..will you listen to my song. (singing begins) Stars upon us casting their spell ........as midnight rainbows readily drown kisses in the wind resting on your cheek ........veiled in love as they cascade down (chorus) No memories clouded in lust No dreams trampled in the dust No souls left in barren waste As we let go in passionate haste. Walks in the park hand in hand ........fingers entwined in lovers rhyme Quiet moments in each others arms ........Don't get lost in yesterday's time (chorus) No memories clouded in lust No dreams trampled in the dust No souls left in barren waste As we let go in passionate haste. Joyfully teasing in our hidden jest ........spurts of laughter voiced out loud Eyes dancing in warmth of darkest sun .........with threats of passion not allowed (chorus) No memories clouded in lust No dreams trampled in the dust No souls left in barren waste As we let go in passionate haste. Let's take our time with this love we share ........smell a few roses as we begin to grow Memories will last a lifetime if we truely care .........for all eternity purity in love I will show (chorus) No memories clouded in lust No dreams trampled in the dust No souls left in barren waste As we let go in passionate haste. (soft whispering) Baby............I love you (repeat chorus and fade) Mark Bohannan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* No purer heart could have been shown in this song from your soul.....no misconceptions of where you are going or what you are thinking...only pure and honest feeling... truly beautiful work that sings of friendship going wherever it is meant to go not guiding it but walkling with it and enjoying each moment as it should be~ |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Oh, this is so beautiful. I wish I could hear you sing it. -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A wonderful song indeed... and now let's hear you sing... come on be a sport... regards, sudhir |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Oh, Mark how absolutely beautiful. Hearts must be throbbing everywhere. Let's take our time with this love we share ........smell a few roses as we begin to grow Memories will last a lifetime if we truely care .........for all eternity purity in love I will show Oh, so romantic are all the words, but these are soooooo beautiful. Great work again!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark..... This is so beautiful,and touching! Do you need a keyboard player for the background music?? Loved it!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--How did a cowboy get to be so good at writing love songs...must be love that made him do it...This is very, very tender! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ this gave me a *SIGH* Loved it! Very romantic.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, how lovely. I would love to hear this, lets ask Sunny to accompany you Catalinamoon |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Holly-Tis the only way to truely get there don't you think. Walking the heart instead of leading it will insure less of a toll on ones heart. Thank you my dear friend.  Jaimie-Thank you but beleive me...you don't want to hear "ME" sing it at all. Sudhir-I am being a sport and a good friend to you by NOT singing it...trust me my good man. Thank you so much. Susan-I know of two hearts for sure that are!!! Thank you so much for your sweet reply.Sunny1-Music on the keyboard would be a good place to start. I got the guitar and could use anothet one any other musicians out there. And don't forget the vocalist. Thank you much. Martie-sometimes a fluke happens.LOLOL...Yes I do believe you are right. Thank you so much my good friend. Sue- A *Sigh* is good....trust me it is VERY good. Thank you kind lady. catalinamoon-I could use all the help I can get to putting this to music. If you find a handful of bored musicians let me know.LOL...Thank you and I am glad you liked it. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Mark, you sir a talent in the making!!! An excellent piece of music Sir. Did I mention I am good at struming?? Guitars that is!!! LOL Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem.I like it a lot!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely style you have written here....James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Such sweet lyrics from your heart... Quite a beauty of expression you have here! Coco |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I say BOY! A song writer and a guitar player to boot!!! I so love when good people, like you, get BIT, RE-BIT, or are constantly bitten, on the butt with love!!! You must have a sore butt.......butt I am beggin you, please DON"T take a bath like "His Bath" by Auguste..to soothe it K? lol Seriously though, I love this as there is no room for wonder where you heart lies for it lies within hers, where it belongs. Beautiful song, I trust you will be singing this and sharing?.... Jenn E |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Mark...I am now completely covered in the heaviest, thickest sappy goo I've ever encountered! ROFLMAO *sigh* This is absolutely beautiful sir. HAD to give you a hard time, of course!  I too, play piano/keyboard and uh...I do vocals too! Four years of choir at school - maybe it will pay off someday...  Thank you so much for sharing this...You do have a talent for lyrics...I would love to play around with this as far as setting some music to it. AND I'd love to hear you sing, I don't care what you say! hehehe Bravo!! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
*raising my hand from the back row* Third, or is that fourth? piano player here I could repeat what everyone else said (Don't worry, I won't ) So I'll say.....Simply Gorgeous....chanson~< !signature-->"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley [This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, MarkB~ I play the field !  You're a character, you know ? There's one lucky gal out there grinning ! This is quite lovely, cowboy ! And the neatest thing is that I know you are sincere with it. Class act !  Best to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
So tender and pretty, Mark...beautiful. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Now you've got all the girls swooning and as soon as I stop, I'll tell you how lovely and tender this song is, and I would love to hear it put to music Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes it can get better than this...but only sometimes, and infrequently at that. Just a little face in the crowd of admirers...applauding... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marina- I would love to see you strumming......your guitar> Thank you much.Vandana-I am glad you liked it. Thanks James-I really appreciate those words from you my friend. Thank you kind sir. Coco-Always nice to hear from you. Thank you so much. JennE-Your million smiles are still being felt way down here. Yes she is in my heart my soul and my every being. Thank you my sweet friend. You are priceless. poetFemmeFatale-These vocals?....tell me more of these PLEASE! ....you may play with it all you want and then some.(the song that is!!!! ) There are only two ways to make me sing and you found one of them in your reply but I ain't a tellin ya what is was.LOL. . Let me know how the music turns out for this....I would REALLY like it to have some and for my baby to hear it. Means the world to me. So you offered my friend of sappy goo now pay up as promised.  Chanson-so why are you way back there...get up on stage will ya...the show is about to begin. Thank you so very much. Marge-so when you PLAY the field...tell me.....just between you and I .....exactly what field are you in and what are you playing with my sweet?  ....you know just how to twang this cowboy don't ya my friend.Thank you very "DEEP"ly... Claire-Thank you so much. Glad you saw the beauty in it. Liz-if you get too dizzy let me know and I will try to catch you and as soon as you are done swooning I would love to hear how you liked it. ....the music is now up to PFF as she volunteered and you can help me to push her to keep her words.lololol....hey she offered you know. Karilea-Thank you for the applause and you are NEVER just a face in the crowd around here. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
bet ya didnt know i could type in handcuffs LOL shhhhhhhhh...dont tell the warden i was here.. had to put this in my library file.... love this Mark... reminds me of guitars and cowboys.. me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
JM-May I see your pass please. I thought so. Now off to your cell with you. Go on scoot girl...LOL....I aint touchin the handcuff comment at all. Thank you and as your warden I must say that this time it is ok as I benefitted from it by your wonderful presence. Hugs to you. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Mark-A very beautiful piece from your heart. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Mark - - JMHO - but this may well be the best you've written - (that i've read at least) - you're sincerity and sensitivity shows through with every word in every line. Well done! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, What a lovely romantic song you sing. I, like Elizabeth, am swooning where I sit. So incredably sweet rp25 |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
so THESE are the kinds of songs the cowboys sing gathered around the campfire at night with the cows mooing in the background! You done real good here, Mark. The ladies are swooning and my toes are tapping. Very well done...... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Gemini-THANK YOU so much for that and yes it was. Wilfred- Martie told me you were a class act and I must agree. I thank you my friend and I am so glad you liked it. rp25-wow I hope you dont fall out of the chair. Thank you so much for your kindness Balladeer-Yessiree them thar be tha ones. Thank you so much but WHY "deer" sir ARE YOU tapping your feet on LJA's head? Glad you liked it. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oooooohhh - (stomping loudly) I'm SOOOO jealous of that Janet!!! Handcuffs? How could one be so lucky???  So that explains where that little stinker went! Argh! NO FAIR NO FAIR!Mark - hehehe Okay...now calm down! Did we ever like "handshake" on this? Because if you could only SEE the layer of *dust* on my piano, you'd just cringe! I haven't even had a chance to sit down and play for at least over a year! *sigh* It's one of those things, that gets "put aside" when one's life gets too hectic! hehe Of course, this could be my excuse to sit down, dust it off, and get it a playin' again! You're a silly man! I'll let you know if I even remember how to play, ok? Aaaah heck, it's like riding a bicycle, so I'll see what I can do, capice? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
As a lover of lyric poetry, well this was wonderful. You obviously put a lot of work into this one Mark! Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
PFF-Now why would you be jealous? You still have the **** and the ******* don't you? I have been meaning to talk to you about all that dust. Why would we shake hands when I thought we sealed the contract on ...errrr ...nevermind...you know on what. Now how long before We see your music to this...ballpark..???? no pressure okay?Irish Rose-well thank you and this was my first ever so YOUR words really make me feel good. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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