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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Love There are so many different Types of love in the world Love is such an amazing gift That we all should share It can make you feel like you Can beat anything that life Will surely throw in your way.. Like you can fly through your day’s Existence with a beat of your heart. On a delicate feathery wing Never touching the earth surface … however There is the darkness it can cause It can take away the will to move on Right out of your soul with a Simple swoop of its will Leaving you to feel alone And helpless against the hurt That rages deep inside your heart … however Every living thing longs for it Needing it to survive in this cold world Always yearning for the happiness For the acceptance and fulfillment It can so easily bring to their life It is a simple, precious, confusing gift That everyone has the right to receive. And that everyone should always give. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25.... What a wonderful poem this is! I am fast becoming a fan of yours! The very last two lines are so powerful in their message, yet easy to take in. Very enjoyable..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ 'It is a simple, precious, confusing gift That everyone has the right to receive. And that everyone should always give. AMEN ! Nicely said. Giving is the key ... Receiving is the magnified love returning. It's such a wonderful circle. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sunny - Thank you  The last few lines are what gave me trouble. But judging from your and Marge's response.. I figured them out ok. I'm glad you stopped in.Marge - I agree with your setiments exactly. To recieve love you have to give it.. and the rewards of that are simply amazing. Thank you for stopping in. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rosepetal, Your poem is simply the truth, universal to the whole world and effects all who live, so very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
So lovely and TRUE! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderfully written and so very true! Nothing is more powerful than love. Excellent writing, I loved this piece Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Every living thing longs for it Needing it to survive in this cold world Always yearning for the happiness For the acceptance and fulfillment It can so easily bring to their life It is a simple, precious, confusing gift That everyone has the right to receive. And that everyone should always give. This is the most beautiful one I have read today. You are amazing in your writings and this one surpasses them all. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Cerenity - I'm glad you enjoyed it. LM - Thank you for stopping in Melissa - I appreciate your kind words..thank you Mark - You leave me speechless with your amazing compliments. Thank you so much my friend. I'm glad you liked it. |
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