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The bridge
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The bridge |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
In the dark in the silence you return to me Your touch is there the warmth we share it's still here miles between our hearts are bridged everyday with memories of moments I want to cross the bridge and get to the other side but I'm afraid of heights So I don't look down I keep my eyes on your love as you lead me across slowly, patiently, sweetly so that when I look up I'm looking at you ** Im never afraid , when you're with me Jeffrey. Thank you... for helping me across the bridge. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
How lucky a man Jeffrey and you are lucky as well to have him. Maybe BLESSED is a better word. Lovely sweet and tender show of faith in your love.  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
JCGirl... this one is sooooo sweet it brings a tear to my eye reading the expression of your adoration and love for UknowWho Lovely poem thanx 4 the enchanting read |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is very lovely in it's tenderness. A beautiful tribute to love, love that is true!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
Thank you for commenting. It's hard to put such big feelings into such small words, but I'm doing my best to express the... the ahhh...mmm..see?? Out of words already |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh my!!! My darling, You have no idea what this just did for me. You know sometimes I still find it hard to believe that I found someone so amazing, but what I find even harder to believe is the fact that you love me as much as I love you. There is another post coming for you very soon dear sweet POET of mine I love you, Jeffrey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
bttt for my baby |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I guess it just shows you that that saying is true.....Love can built a bridge...... Wonderful words..... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Boy can it ever??? I'm still amazed by these words dear |
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