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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Do not tremble my lady when the rain fades away Do not fall out of silence for the difference today Hands press for feeling of moments that were made Those presents we shared and kept the night the moon came to play. Do not tremble dear lady for hearts still beat the same Of destiny's we shall wonder Yet our feelings do remain The tears in your voice of what has become again A question of love that you should have once more. Do not tremble dear lady for hearts content has given way The nights rain is cleansing like those showers that took our pain And yes I wonder also to look into your eyes again To fall into your arms and smile knowing this all today. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
So beautifully written... I loved it so much! Great one! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful indeed. Your style and the easiness of your flow make your creations so wonderful to read. I applaud your poem but I bow to your talent. Well done.  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love the repetion of the first line - how lovely! And the whole poem is so well written by a talented hand Superb! Liz |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A difficult write for sure my friend. Your heart is never hidden. Hugs.....love ya, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beautiful, such purity, and so well written. I stand humbly before the feet of a master, this is so good! Take a dream and craft it, and after setting it to perfection, this would be the result!  |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Very nice indeed! Soft and well stated. I enjoyed this one a lot! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
touching and emotionally honest poem Michael, once again you pen my heart as well... dreams touched but not held... what could have been, lost to what has to be... damn I wish I didnt relate so well... but then that is the reason your poetry effects me so... in time...it will all make sense... take care my gentle poet of heart... jm |
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