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Venturing in Sven's Challenge Weaving the Fabric of Romance
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Venturing in Sven's Challenge Weaving the Fabric of Romance |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana 
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Waving goodbye to my lover Enlacing one last look Anguish over the lost Vanishing touch In-between cotton sheets Novel written for two Gazing at the finish line Trotting alone Heaven gone Exposing darkness Feverishly going over the past Attraction so bright Bathing in each other Rising life once dormant I bought myself a beautiful wedding dress Carefully I will wear it on halloween night Overflowing sap Featuring maple syrup on your lips Riding on your unicorn Offering empty promises Magnifiying love with a big fake heart Animated in the Garden of Eden Nuance of our skin Coloring creation Embroidering our vision monique |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Monique~ What an attractive acrostic. Some thoughtful phrases sprinkled throughout this render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Monique, what a simply stunning tapestry you draw here and I love the acrostic. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
And a successful venture this is, monique. Very pretty!  ...chanson~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Monique, This was awesome and I loved the line (in-between cotton sheets novel written for two) wonderfully done friend, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful monique. . . I really like the acrostic on this one. . . and the words and the setting that you have here really make this one sing. . . superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Tan...kyou tan.kyou E...vry bo..dy Can you hear me sing it? It is so exciting to be able to write something and it is so hard for me but... i want to keep on trying Thank you again for your presence monique [This message has been edited by monique (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Monique.... This was very well done, and I liked the beautiful wedding dress to be worn on Halloween..(that's my birthday, and you have given me ideas for a costume!!) Loved it!!!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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