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To Day Is My Sons Birthday
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To Day Is My Sons Birthday |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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To day is my sons birthday, A.J. will be 19 I should not be telling the world how OLD I am but he is so very precious to me and I always have him in my heart, Happy Birthday son I love so very much, Mom Chase The Stars My eyes did see you as a babe, but a young man you are. Across the many sunsets you have come gaining strength and wisdom for all to see. Your challenges have been many, you concord them all. You placed gleam upon my eyes, and laughter among my breaths. I wish a star for you to ride and gale winds upon your back, for I know you will go far, and many trails you will blaze. I have not the strength to follow you well, but upon my mind you will always dwell. You can come back to me with all of your tales to tell. Keep your sights among the stars for they shine brightest and will take you far. My love will be with you both day and night and forever more my only son. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
What a lucky son you have vice versa monique |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Cerenity... Thank you for sharing your happiness in this lovely poem.....I know your son is proud of you, too!! Even though we haven't met, wish him Happy Birthday from me.....sometimes it's special coming from a complete stranger!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A very warm and loving poem. Your love was conveyed in every line. What a treasure! Liz |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, I wanted to say thank you for your lovely thoughts, I carried this child for six weeks past his time of arrival, he started eating cereal at three days old and started all of the boy stuff VERY early, he has for sure kept me on my toes but I am very proud of him, once again thank you for your loving remarks. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
With wishes from his mom like this how could he not travel among the stars. Heck, he will probably wrap one up for you and give it to you for Mother's Day. Very beautiful poem.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey cerenity, wish him well for me... You of course have penned a wonderful gift for him... he should be as proud of you as you are of him, if not more... CHEERS to the family... regards, sudhir |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Absolutely beautiful gift... he's very lucky!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a fitting title for such a lovely gift to your son, Cerenity. This is wonderful, and makes obvious the bond you have with him. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
No need to wrap this gift....it's beautiful. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, You all are so very sweet, I can't thank you enough for the beautiful thoughts, and I want all who replyed to this poem to know that I read all of your wonderful words to my son over the phone and he was almost in tears, he had no idea what kind of site this was or how it worked and I have been trying to get him to do a prose, he can write storys like you would not believe he is trully a natureal I am hoping some day though, I thank you all so very much and so does he. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so beautiful and so hard I know to write for I have a daughter that is 19, and tears come to my eyes when I'm writing for her. Children are truly one of God's greatest gifts. It seems they grow so quickly and then are all grown up sometimes I'm simply amazed looking at mine. Happy birthday to your son. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Cerenity, that was a beautiful and loving poem for your son. I hope his birthday was wonderful. Elizabeth |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Cerenity, My sons are 5 and 2 and I can't imagine them being 19.....well somedays I wish they were...lol You have a loving heart and your gift of write has obviously rubbed of on your son......maybe he will post one day. Sweet poem and wish him a HAPPY BIRTRHDAY! Jenn E |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Man Oh Man, am I having spelling problems or what!!! BIRTHDAY......lol |
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