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Upon warm duvet of feathers................
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Upon warm duvet of feathers................ |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I hope this is ok to put here......... Upon warm duvet of feathers my gentle body placed seductive voice seduces sweet lips is what I taste His turn to take control nothing I want more Do to me what you will love, taste, explore..... Breathing starts to quicken Fingers in his hair Life could end this moment I really would'nt care Reaching point of pleasure of this I will confess and all I have left to say is YES.. YES... YES... [This message has been edited by Jenn E (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
YES... This was my first read for the night, and what a way to get things started. So much ecstasy and passion here. Loved it!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh.....Jenn E.....this is wonderful, and erotic, but done in a style of grace that I really admire!!!! Fantastic job, my good friend, and you have become a new inspiration!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I love feathers and how warm they can get, have any room left in there? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JennE~ Softly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
MysticalNights* Thank You kind sir...  Sunny1* A big bunch of Thank You's. I have never been a "inspiration" before, so I will take that generous comment, smile and say Thank you MG* Forever room for you........ hehehe Marge* Thank you....... Jenn E |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Jenn E, this was very passionett. Oh darn wish I was there....  Parker |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
YUMMMMM!!!!!! i love feathers.... wonderful! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Whew I was worried when I read your prepost comment but you have penned it with taste in a very sensual way. Loved it ALMOST as much as you did.  |
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