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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Water Words ~*Marge Tindal*~ Bathed beauty cascades Flowing with current swift Moving amid the cresting waves Undulating rapids of the river's run Drenched with the moisture of the morn Pooling in the crevices of dampened earth Ebbing tides demolishing sand castles Precipitous pleasures pour forth Babbling over pebbles smooth Springing well wishes Sprinkled showers Refreshingly Saturated ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"GOTTA GET ME SOME OF THAT..." thank you for that refreshing piece of poetry....loved the way this one felt... A beauty, mom! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Marge, Got a towel? This is the wettest poem I've ever read and one of the prettiest. "Pooling in the crevices of dampened earth." I love it, Marge  Michael by Michael Auguste "But I am so like everyone. And everyone is so like me We cork our contents, lest they flee Until our lives are spent and d |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hiya Marge, the flow of this poem is splendid... Had me with the urge to jump into a casacading waterfall...hmm now where do I find one of those... Coco |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Marge, I don't know what I like most: the very descriptive words which captivate my senses, granting the scent of earthmould with the soft sound of cascading water; or the water drop wordart. Either way, most excellent poem.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge this is so wonderful and I am glad I picked it up. I read this one two ways but as I know you I will leave one of them alone...lollll...must miss me baby.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge... Another truly wonderful poem from you and nice design, too!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Thanks, Hon. Just had the feeling of liquidity about me. Got to thinking of water phrases and SPLASH ! So pleased you enjoyed it ! Michael~ So glad you felt the water's movement. Think about all the ways water flows through our day ... inspiring isn't it ? Dani~ Hey - that waterfall may be calling my name too ! North Carolina is a nice place to start and then into Tennessee .... Oh ... I need a vacation ! ! AliCat~ So very glad you enjoyed both. MarkB~ Glad to know you enjoyed it. It comes in Hot or Cold ! ! Take your choice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ You sneaked in .... thanks ! Just playing with some water words !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
~Marge~ As the tiny beads of rain unite in communal harmony in a free-fall from atop a green-top mountain, fresh and lithe like a beautiful damsel's lovely long hair, flowing down from the heights forming a pool, and kinetics causes a stream to form, brushing the green knee-length rushes in the far meadow. Streams couple and form rivers, friendly rivers meet in the deep sea united in the still maintained harmony of the raindrops. As that happened the moon, she giggles, causing ripples in the vast sea. tidal waves hit the bottom of my feet as i dream of a mermaid rushing out to me in an impossible magnetised attraction. Ah! To dream is a pleasure amidst watered world. ever so purely refreshing and sensational ~Sudhir~ does that say that I loved it ...my regards... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ What that lovely creation says to me is that you are a wonderfully creative poet ! I Love It ! Wonderful, wonderful way to jump-start my day ! My friend ..... amazing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, whata lovely, fluid piece, so refreshing. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Every word that you write is vividly painted, Marge...how do you do it??? Your poetry continues to amaze me with its sheer beauty and flow. Oh and Sudhir's reply was quite fitting and beautiful as well. (Don't mind that I'm commenting on his as well, do you?)  All around, purely poetic words dancing here today. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh now ... this one I so enjoy saying I loved the "flow" Marge ... truly I did! Beautiful imagery ... I soaked it all in, and now am inspired to sit beneath a gentle waterfall and watch it cascade before me. Just beautiful Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhh Marge what a refreshing start to my day. Such a beautiful scene, waking my senses. As hot and humid as it is here in good ol' NY, I'd like to dip my toes in the pools left by those ebbing tides. Just lovely Marge. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sonjes~ Oh, I thank you so much. Shucks, I think we all just 'go with the flow.' And my friend, Sudhir, can share my space anytime ! Isn't he wonderful? Kit~ May you find the waterfall of your dreams and bath merrily under it's cascade. Thank you. Bonnie~ I wish you waves of cool refreshing delight ! Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge, What a nice way to start the morning off Such a nice wonderful poem I loved the flow and design. rp25 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...you dont know what this did for me right now...thank you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You are all wet...just kidding, couldn't help it...I loved this poem and all the different looks at sweet water...Wonderful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ I apologize for missing your sweet reply up there. Thank you ! ! RosePetals~ Thank you. Catch a wave ! Paula~ Hon - if it helped ..... I'm glad ! *Hugs* ! Martie~ HEY ! I resemble that remark ! ! ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, you're too young to be washed up already!! Just kiddin'....I lake it a lot! You are always good to the last drop, poetessy one  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge You never cease to amaze me with your writing. Loved it! Deb |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Marge just joy, pure pleasure, and sparkling with sunshine. I love this poem. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Oh Marge this sounds like it was written for me  ). I'm a fish..the ocean, the river or the tub.. as long as its wet.... so much so my husband said no lap top..no one would get in the bath room....lol If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ I 'lake' you too ! Bunches ! ! BloomingRose~ Thank you for the lovely e-mail. I've sent you a reply. Thanks for asking ... I love to help. Beverley~ Thanks so much for the nice comments. Tori~ I figured you for a water gal ! So pleased to have you catch it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Absolutely breathtaking Marge, both poem and presentation. Your mind is a treasure! Robert Frost and Shakespeare have nothin' on you, girl! Take care, my friend, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
AQUASOME!!!! Kathleen |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
In Such harmony with Nature... Very well written... If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Marge this is gorgeous. But ~~~sigh~~~ yours always are. Bravo my friend. Hugs, Juls |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Marge, reminds me of a "hidden" waterfall we used to hide out at when summer's heat was too intense... a place of cool, delicious retreat from the unpleasantness of life... thanks for the reminder! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thanks, hon. Kathleen~ *giggle* .. I love it ! Avanti~ Thank you for the nice comments. Juliet~ Hugs right back to you, gal. Daniel~ I'm so pleased you found the 'waterfall' of your youth. Thank you for your reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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