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The Whole of Time...(Mark B...heart hugs)
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The Whole of Time...(Mark B...heart hugs) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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I've watched the skies at night fill up with stars and all their glow. Stood wondering why and whence they came to put on such a show. When hearing sounds of birdlike song, from robins, cardinals red, my eyes seek glass to view their dance and watch them in their stead. Each night I pick one evening star to rest my eyes upon. Make wishes as it flickers, flares in hopes that come the dawn, when I awake my dreams and thoughts are heard upon a breeze, delighting me, releasing sad, to allow my mind to ease. I've walked the paths along the tracks, through marshes, meadows too, in deepened snows (I love the most) in night or morning's dew. Yet all alone, with thoughts of "once upon a time" you see, the loving's gone and all that's left is an empty memory. Tomorrow's hope and with it's dawn, my heart will feel a tug, Remembering the moments each, when arms around would hug. To hear the pounding, rhythmic sounds against, when holding near your sweetest kiss of lips that touch, your heart hugs, I still hear. I'll hold onto those tugging thoughts and dream kiss you each night, until the sun begins ascent to shine upon me, light. The future is the whole of time, laid 'fore me, splayed in gold Tomorrow's new will walk this path, once again, in lover's hold. Maureen *8*30*2k (inspired)*Mark I used your idea of heart hugs to improve this poem I had written..I hope it was what you expected...  thank you for giving me some inspiration at this time....[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Maureen... I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem! I like the way the last line brings it to a close, and the wording is wonderful....... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Tomorrow's hope and with it's dawn, my heart will feel a tug, Remembering the moments each, when arms around would hug. To hear the pounding, rhythmic sounds against, when holding near your sweetest kiss of lips that touch, your heart hugs, I still hear. ------------------------- Maureen, this is beautiful and the imagery was excellent.  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sunny1 this was a doubly inspired poem...the first three stanzas I wrote a few months back..no title... was a reponse to another's poem (I often enjoy responding in poetry) and Mark B. left me a response under my thought kisses that heart hugs are nice, too..and inspired me to use heart hugs..which I added in the remaining two verses...I am glad I did..I always wanted to add more to this one...thank you for enjoying ~~soft heart hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Eloise thank you for your kind words and for reading ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Maureen- You have honored me just by noticing what I write in my replies and to use it in inspiration wellllll..need I say it? I am at a loss for words...yup...the cowboy said it....no words. So beautiful and I thank you. Here is a HUGE HEART HUG for you....mmmmmmmmmppppppppfffff. how was that? |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Maureen, this is so pretty. Such lovely images. ...chanson~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
*lol now Mark don't tease me..ok?.... be warned...and I lead a rather sedate, boring life so I have to use my mind and other's thoughts to inspire my writing... ~~soft hugs Maureen just keep on inspiring me..and I will keep on using you that doesn't sound too nice does it..but you know what I mean* just teasin' a bit |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
chanson~ thank you for the visit ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Maureen You write such beautiful music in your words. Hold on to those memories - they keep you warm on a cold night. didi |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
didi thanks..it's going to be a cold winter here I have that feeling M |
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