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I cant figure out a title(help)
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I cant figure out a title(help) |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
As the days go by my soul longs for you to be by my side I love you more than any other only you can sastisfy You alone are my soul's desire only your love is in my heart Can you feel the love that longs for you? you fill me the joy and love I was lost and you have found me. "look Back on life with kindly eyes" Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by EroseGrover (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
How's about, "Saying Goodbye to the Lost and Found"? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi.... The feeling I get from this poem is the deep desire, a great longing to share this person's love. My title choice would be: "My Soul's Desire"......at any rate..I think it is beautiful!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
For some reason, this title stuck in my head. " Passing Days of Desire" I don't know what you think of it, but hey... don't say I didn't try!!  Great read!I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Erose~ Very nicely said. I think that 'Only You' sums it up nicely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your desires..I suggest the title..."You in my heart"...James |
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