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What You Can Do…[dedicated to two very special people]
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What You Can Do…[dedicated to two very special people] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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What You Can Do…[dedicated to two very special people] I want to hide in your eyes Shelter me in your soul Want you to take the pain away Make me again feel whole Come to me, float to me On the winds of love I want to dance in your shoes Be of your limbs and glide Want my wings unfettered But keep me here at your side Waltz with me, walk with me To the tunes of love Give me the freedom to love and tease And never ask where my mind lies Be close enough for you to squeeze And relish those moments on high Wishes are commands, yours are mine To the timelessness of love, entwined But mostly I want to hide in your eyes… Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Alright, karilea, ya lil tease - who ARE these two people of whom you so eloquently wrote? I wanna know (just in the off-chance I am one of them, which will give me great bragging rights over that ne'erdowell Balladeer!) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine. . . Whoever they are. . . they are two very lucky people indeed, and doubly lucky to have you as a friend. . . Just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Found dancing in your eyes is the love of two Shared thoughts and souls they are entwined Seen singing with angels by one such as you A most special friend of the lovliest kind Country born and then raised in natures hand Upon pastures of grazing in this land so sweet Lies the heart and love of one so very grand Merrily we know that one day we all shall meet With the thanks of a butterfly and of course I We bless you with our hearts in hands we now hold For you have seen us on the dance floor in the sky Through the stories that we have now been told. ***Hey, I am claiming this one for my love and I and Hugging my friend Karilea for being so sweet to put such a gem to print for us to share.LOL.....who knows but if the shoe fits.....!!!!!!    |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sigh ... simply beautiful Karilea ... absolutely wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I don't know who the other one is but, as for me, I appreciate this more than you know  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Karilea! Just lovely! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm in awe...this is so very beautiful. The form and the flow of this were perfection...your "two very special" people should be very touched by your display of heart in this piece...did I mention this was Beautiful!!! Adding this one to my library to read over and over again...the last line.. I want to hide in your eyes A perfect way to wrap this gem up~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Mike, it's for you and 'Deer, didn't you know?...LOL Sven, they are very fortunate people... For heaven's sake Mark, quit upstaging me!...and if you want to lay claim...then go right ahead... Kit, thanks... 'Deer we appreciate you, too...and forgive me for the slam on LJA... thank you denise!... BDC, 'zactly...and thank you for the lovely comments... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely poem and I can relate |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice Poem.I'm sure they're very special people to you.Enjoyed it!!!!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yes ma'am, just wanted your autograph!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hoot, Vandana...thanks, these are two special folk... Mark...you need a life... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, Special poem, special people indeed. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Beautiful words for two lucky people. Dee |
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