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Angry Boy |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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little child so restless and scared running the streets no where to go it has happened....just what he feared hide the tracks and no one will know the puddles in the alleyway reflect the boy he is today thunder echos all of his fears the sounds won't escape his head oh mommmies boy is playing with the dead the rage now unleashed held inside for many years this little boy lost...broken left to beg, borrow and steal happiness he believes he never knew the little boy with eyes so blue he's gonna lose this fight no one wins at this game notorious at best soon they'll all know his name and all he needed was attention never got any you thought he wasn't special well he believed you now he's gone he's lost to you tell me what did you think he would do angry boy wanders blaming you rage burning hate welling and to himself inside yelling no one hears his silent screams wicked thoughts fill his dreams fantasies of what he'll do little boy with eyes so blue tell me what did you think he'd do? now he is so angry at you..... and he tried to run he tried to hide tried to get through to the other side every door shut in his face so now he's lost left without a trace of that little boy with eyes so blue do you think he thinks of you? tell me now....what are you gonna do? do you believe it's not too late he's standing just outside of hells' gate if you dare venture there let him know how much you care take him swiftly by the hand i see you shedding a tear this little boy just don't understand soul broken..lost..hidden from view of the little boy with eyes so blue.....< !signature--> Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
JulieAnn, your posts are always so very powerful. This is sad indeed and yet reminds us of the lost ones still wanting to be found. It's never too late. Absolutely couldn't stop reading. Fantasticly done! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
JulieAnn, This is excellent writing... WOW regards, sudhir |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you Susan I am gald you liked it.... Sudhir~~~You are too kind.... thank you  Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your growth as of late shows in your newest posts. Are ya taking lessons from the masters or what? Lovely piece from you. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you Mark.....I am gald you liked it....but no masters around here.....just lots of inspiration... Julie :) |
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