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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-08-29 03:00 PM


The homeless people that scan the urns
for aluminum cans to recycle are the archeologists
of our era. But all is in bloom,-- the flowers and ferns,--
the spring was designed by the allergists
as the multi-million dollar advertisement
to attract running noses and unknown
poets. I too got caught in that enticement
and now I wander through these streets alone
and write down my memories. If I could just
capture this breeze and convert it to verse,
but I’m powerless. With the naked eye I lust,
and crave like the bees to taste the flowers, or in reverse
to be tasted like flowers. Bright blue skies
immerse my thoughts and my senses
and no pills or drops can prevent the watery eyes
as the salty liquid slowly condenses,
on chapped lips and white sheets,-- of paper
and bedclothes. He who writes with tears,
writes sincerely and it’s pleasure not labor,--
preserving in verse, the short, fragile years.



Check out my poetry here:


http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet


© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-08-29 03:06 PM


You have most accurately stated, so very poetically at that, the "why" of why we write. Such insight you display in this tale of truth! Wonderful!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 2000-08-29 07:49 PM


Thank you Claire, I truly appreciate your comments...
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