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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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NightDreams he sings love’s song sincere and through the night somehow makes all, alright words that come only to me in midnight moment’s majesty soft and tender they do flow leaving within inner glow glowing warm growing tender love songs render me weak yet willing heart is trilling softest touch whispered words ever heard comfort my ache deny me not love be slaked by words wrought wondrously magically mysteriously too soon to be awakened from my dream NightDreams to be revisited 29 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. I love the way it is written.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Xeonox, kind comments...thank you! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Surely, the singer of this song has penned an excellent one indeed!!! Superb, my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mmm I like this a lot, flowing and delicate. These are the dreams we want to have.. catalinamoon |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Geesh, sunshine! You're beginning to amaze me here.... |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Night dreams so full of passion. Really enjoyed this one. Your words flow so smooth and majestic. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, thank goodness the pen IS working... Cat, I share well... 'Deer, stay amazed...stay very amazed...['tis the only hold I have on you!] Susan, that's a lovely compliment, thank you! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The Prolific Pen of Sunshine strikes again. Inscribing once more thoughts (dreams this time) that touch me directly. Keep writing Karilea - I must keep reading such beautiful poetry ~Love is a symbol of eternity. It wipes out all sense of time,destroying all memory of a beginning and all fear of an end. ~ Germain de Stael ~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WOW, Bill, thank you! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Dream On... ... and happy dreaming... regards sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, revisiting my "dreamy state" does temper my days...thank you... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, how truly romantic and it looks as though someone's muse has been on a roll |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ruth....one word....BINGO! |
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