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Today, Tomorrow, Forever
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Today, Tomorrow, Forever |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Today, tomorrow, forever That's how long this love will be The way I feel when we kiss Girl, it's everything I'll ever need That soft look in your eyes When we make love so sweet Tells me that you love me Sending shivers from head to feet Your hair falling into your face Leaving soft shadows there I could get lost in this memory I hope you know just how much I care You are just so incredible To deserve this, what ever did I do? But you make me so very happy Just being there and loving you Yes, today, tomorrow, forever That's how long this love will be I am yours now and always Or as long as you want me To my love.....  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OH Jeff...this is exquisite... |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Words written so beautifully, hearts so full of love. Your lady must be very special and she is lucky to have someone with such a romantic heart. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I hope when she reads this, her heart melts, and then she can see what a romantic you are Good luck Jeffrey. Marie~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is sing-songy, JC...I like it! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Jeffery!!!!! SSOO Sweet!!! Will you giv some of the guys i have been dating lessons in love...??? PLEASE!!!! Anyway Loved it.....what else can be said??  Julie :) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Jeffrey, I admire your ability to express your tenderness so openly (and poetically!) Very nicely written, my friend. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Paula, I thank you much Susan, I guess it just takes the right person to bring out the romantic side of all of us Mariee, Thank you it is good to hear from you again Sunshine, This is my heart singing out to the one I love Julieann, Sorry but I think when you find the right guy he will not need lessons....for love cannot be learned Thank you Claire I just want to say that I never knew what love was until I found this special lady. She is my heart's desire Thank you all again |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Being the hopeless romantic that I am - I absolutely love this! It is so beautiful, this is how true love should be! And if this poem is written about your persoanl life I am very happy for you and wish you the best! If only all men were as sentimental, romantic and loyal as you are.Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
If my eyes were not swollen from surgery, I would certainly write more reply here (wheww).. I must say, that lady certainly must count her blessings every day to find someone as loving and tender and passionate as you. The words you write come straight from the heart, that's very clear and honest. I enjoyed it.. very very much Regards, Redwriter1 Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeff, This is a loving tribute to your love my friend. You have written from your heart and it is beautiful. Very sincere and romantic writing here. You have expressed yourself well. Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Melissa, Thanks but you know? We can't all be perfect  Kay_lynn, Sorry to hear about your surgery, hope you get well real real soon and yes this is straight from my heart Jenn, Thanks yes this was written especially for my love |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A wonderful work here, Jeffrey... lovely... regards, sudhir |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my Jeffery...I don't know how she could help but be moved by this incerdibly romantic piece, I certainly was and it wasn't even written for me |
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