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To a Lost Love
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To a Lost Love |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
To a Lost Love The secret shared, the hand upon my cheek, The knowing glance, the mesmerizing smile, The touch that renders sturdy knees so weak, The honest charm, the wit, the lack of guile. The reassuring warmth of her embrace, The silent calm of walking hand in hand, The privilege of sharing in her grace, The joy in being sure she'll understand. The strength unselfish love alone bestows, The blessings friendship readily endows, The happiness this one she kisses knows, The peace that only loving her allows. She used these gifts my broken heart to mend, My world, my hope, my dream, my love, my friend. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
 --Kess YOUR LIFE IS A TEST It is only a test ... If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
AHA.... How nice to see your wonderful sonnets grace our walls, sir... This is a lovely one, indeed..  |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
wow...this is just beautiful...i cannot simply say anything else other than beautiful < !signature-->"my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt [This message has been edited by JnR4eva (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You've expressed with a simplistic brilliance the very attributes that I would find most appealing in another. This is a lovely piece of writing. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sweet and simple, yet profound. Dee |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This flowed so smoothly, I didn't recognize it as a sonnet Just brilliant! Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
David, a beautiful testimony to this love, and even though it has been lost that you still recall it with such beauty, it must have been a very special time for you both. Corinne |
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