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Savor Candied Snows
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Savor Candied Snows Fall soft this time to blankets green, to cushioned thought and darkened fabric trees. Encircle vines crawling by, through fields with timber toes. Gently rest in salted core and savor candied snows. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely...makes for many thoughts... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent work... short but way more effective than many of the long ones that write... Hats off... (oops not wearing any...what a dumb expression!)  regards, sudhir |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you two kindly for reading this little piece of me. I appreciate your time. *Peace. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spitfire, a beautiful poem. Sigh short and very sweet. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
That has in all honesty got to be in the top 10 or so poems I have ever read it's amazing . How did you manage to work the beutiful associative metaphor into the perfect rhyme while keeping it short and invocing memories from the past . I absolutly loved this poem and humbly bow so my forehead touches my toes ( I think this is possible ) . Anyway you get the gist . Thanks . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very pretty... jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
exquisite---like fine needlepoint, spitfire, you just keep getting better and better! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This poetry is satin, it rolls off the tongue. I knew it would be when I read your name. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It's me, making repititious comments  Loved it, all the above responses said it too well.. catalinamoon |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Bri,thanx for stopping by this one. I appreciate you ya know. ~Tom, my goodness that has got to be the coolest reply I've received. I owe you a huge thank you for your graciousness. ~Jwesley, thank you for your time. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~Serenity, you are far too kind to me. ~Kethry, I always love it when you visit my words. Thank you, always. ~Cat, anything you feel like saying is fine by me. Just knowing you came by is enough to lighten my time. Thank you. *Peace to each of you fine people.  . |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Love these short poems! Your writing is just wonderful! Roll to the top! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I beleive this is the first of yours that I have read. This one does just roll off the tongue, and leave the mind with images. Beautifully written. Marie~ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sounds pretty - have no clue what it means - but it sounds pretty.  |
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