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A Chorus for Long John Silver (aka LngJhnAg)
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A Chorus for Long John Silver (aka LngJhnAg) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Long John went to see his shrink His confidence was shook He'd lost it somewhere in a dream He felt he'd be forsook 'Twas terrible' ol Longjohn said, 'It was the worst dream ever' 'Tis fine' said the psychiatrist, 'Your cure is my endeavor!" 'Just lay your head upon the couch And put your feet up here, Now tell me all about your dream, Was it of Balladeer?' 'Nay!' said Long John feeling worse, 'I dreamed there was a chorus, of dancing girls all around me, such beauty they were gorgeous!" 'Blondes, brunettes, and redheads there, All clad in slinky sequins,' 'Doesn't sound so bad to me' said the doctor 'go on speaking.' 'Oh no!', said Long John 'you don't understand, The worst is yet to come, I said I was surrounded there, For I was the red-headed one!!!' [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
What goes around comes around huh? [This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
There's a poem in there somewhere...  [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*SNICKER* |
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Lily121 Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 24 |
Lol! What a funny poem... you should send it to someone who's spirits are down... that'll really boost them up! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Xangel... that's how ya loose your halo by reading the likes of these here poems... lol glad it snickered ya... Lily... that's why I post em here kid... Thanks for the read!  Long John... You're too quiet out there... I can hear you thinking about a retaliatory blow... [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
well I came to see the party but that redhead keeps getting in the way.....oh.......that's Long John........*blush* rofg.....great laughs  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Atta boy! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I can imagine LongJohn dreaming that since sequins are standard dress. Lorelei said he was a drag but I had no idea....  I like an equal opportunity slammer... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great poem local Rebel!  (loved your reply Balladeer!) ROFL!Best wishes, /Kit |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Kit, Corazon, deer, Sunshine.... glad you got a laugh... time for a little pickup in here... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such a brave Rebel to take on the likes of an old Scalawag...  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Reb you really put your sole into this poem and your heel into Long John's back.Is Long John really that mch of a drag. Well done. I haven't laughed this hard since I descovered nitros-oxide. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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