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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-08-23 01:27 PM


Sleeping Beauty The Rose


The quiet of the night ushers in moonlight
glowing silver shimmers of light sweeping over
the delicate pink rose

Dream sleeping beauty
whispers of promise you'll hear
softly calling, to draw you near

She waits in her sleep
for the promise he'll keep
to be awakened by a kiss
from the morning dew

Slowly she opens each petal
droplets of kisses meld with golden shimmers
of soft sunlight

such bliss...
this kiss from the morning dew


BloomingRose


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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-08-23 01:37 PM


Ah! Touche!
WONDERFUL work.... I am so gladdened by reading this beautiful verse...

regards,
sudhir

ladysixstring
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2 posted 2000-08-23 01:46 PM


Oh, I just have to read this to my girls when they get home!!!

-jaimie

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BloomingRose
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3 posted 2000-08-24 09:50 AM


Sudhir
Thank you, you are always so kind.

ladysixstring
I am glad you liked it. What a nice thing that you want to read it to your girls.  


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-08-29 09:26 PM


BloomingRose~
This is a delightful little piece.
I'm glad I was reading some things I had missed earlier.
Thanks for sharing.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2000-08-30 09:30 AM


What a lovely boquet for the mind  
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