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Chaos |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Mathematicians Other scientists Study chaos Chaos theory. Some say It reflects Their home life After kids. Or After a grandparent Moved in. Sometimes None of the above Things beyond random, In the local realm Out of control Tantalizing images Just out of reach Warm, inviting Substantial and amorphous Blown by winds Unfelt Sounds of music Dissonant Mixed with tones of Incredible beauty Daliesque montages Limp figures Softened Out of focus Smiling, beguiling Like net words On screen Instantaneous Before A GPF. Climbing out A chaotic pit Growing above Deeper No apparent exit Sunlight With your face Shines down, Wraps me In arms, Carries me up The ordered world Returns. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is chaos? Well I like it then... |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
This was just downright "fun to read". I especially like this section... "In the local realm, Out of control, Tantalizing images, Just out of reach, Warm, inviting, Substantial and amorphous, Blown by winds Unfelt" -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Bill--What a great description of coming out of disorder into peace...out of chaos came light...anyway...one begot the other..interesting. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Daliesque montage... lights beaming, Mr. Yeats! I'd join your chaotic universe anytime! [Nice to see the photo, Bill!] Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very nice Bill...as always ~~soft smiles Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
 Paula- May not be chaos - but it's me - thanks  Lady6- I must agree- sometimes 'out of control' is a great place to be  Martie- I'm glad you liked - I get these wierd ideas at times Sunshine- You need new glasses (seriously - thank you )Maureen- Thanks ~*Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead. The consciousness of loving and being loved brings a warmth and richness to life that nothing else can bring. ~ Oscar Wilde ~ *~ wilfredyeats@hotmail.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Wilfred, I very much enjoyed your poetic array of images and sensorial observation, and a happy ending, after all. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm glad you liked - your poetry has given me the greatest pleasure ~If you let yourself be absorbed completely, if you surrender completely to the moments as they pass, you live more richly those moments. ~ Anne Morrow Lindbergh ~ *~ wilfredyeats@hotmail.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wilfred, This is fantastic... great writing... so glad that I found this one to read... regards, sudhir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Thank you - - (blush) - I'm glad you enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at you, Mr. Yeats...I just GOT new glasses! Perhaps the tri in the focal isn't focused...now, behave yourself! |
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