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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2000-08-29 08:20 PM


“AN IMAGE OF YOU”

Hands entwined,
fingers gently met.
Sensations are wild,
all of them are felt.

My chest so warm,
from loving breasts.
Emotions aroused,
and all of the rest.

Eyes of brown,
soft and sweet.
Sparkling wildly,
very petite.

Light red hair,
not down your back.
Fragrant, soft as silk,
smelling like a lilac.

So an image flows,
from inside my head.
The woman I need,
wants to be wed.

So please don’t sulk,
not what the hell.
I firmly believe,
you’re my real belle.


Bill Charles



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rosepetals25
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1 posted 2000-08-29 09:56 PM


Bill,

"...Hands entwined,
fingers gently met.
Sensations are wild,
all of them are felt...."
    
   I can't say anything I haven't already said. I love this verse.. so romantic...simply wonderful  

         rp25

ddgoose
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-08-29 10:07 PM


Sir William

I can feel the tingling in the fingertips - OOOOOO la la - feels good.  

didi

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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3 posted 2000-08-30 07:42 PM


Hi rosepetals25,
Thanks for coming by, and your comments are always kind and deeply appreciated.

Hi 'didi',
Nice to see you again. And thank you for your lovely comments, fair lady.


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