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Light's Spark
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Light's Spark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Pain-- a dormency distends--- belly of a life... pretend... Do without and seek within complacency a devil's grin.... Feel it rise and capture throat-- erase the pain of words life wrote-- I wait for dawn unmercifully-- a prayer that sun will rise in me... And even now I search for death-- poison-- in my every breath... I liked the dawn. I liked the dew. I liked the thought of something new. I thought that I adored the dark-- when truly, I just craved light's spark. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know where to find that spark. . . wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
beautiful. That spark is within your reaches....just reach out strong and your words have already brought you so close. Wonderful read.  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very intense..I like this one.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feel it rise and capture throat-- erase the pain of words life wrote-- I wait for dawn unmercifully-- a prayer that sun will rise in me... And even now I search for death-- poison-- in my every breath... I liked the dawn. I liked the dew. I liked the thought of something new. I thought that I adored the dark-- when truly, I just craved light's spark. ======================== YOU ARE THE SPARK BABY!!!!!!!!! oh me sweet twin.... I'm gonna write me sweet sen' a lullaby while Im gone... me thinks me muse might come home... so you be good for me... and for you... and you know...Im ALWAYS here for you... blow me a *kisskiss* in the wind... and I will catch it  love you...MUCHLY me baby girl... its TIME--we actually FELT the sunshine... and kissed the rain... we can do this...ya know why... cause we are POETS...(with breasts) *SMILE* *winkie winkie* me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
serenity, a darkness falls when light is needed so spark is bright when duly greeted I pray your night will be defeated and in your eyes that spark repeated ~ A very moving poem, my friend. Keep writing ~ ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks---and hey you my Janet Marie---seeing you there was like a hug from you today---thank you much for being there---and claire, I even admire your replies---as full of thought and grace as is your poetry... I thank you so much for the gift of your words---and now, I think I may be able to sleep...thanks to all again, love you all much.... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a magnificent poem this one... Wonderful read... loved each word... weighted to perfection... regards O Serene One, Sudhir ... |
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