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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Midnight Reverie [Part III]
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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Midnight Reverie [Part III] |
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Sunshine
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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Midnight Reverie [Part III] To take myself o’er yon hill to Wizard to pray would Wizard grant my wish, to cast thy spell, woven well throughout moon’s coming moon’s light beam and entreat perhaps Sir Knight, good Knight in darkest of raiment come to me hitherto my call of heart to heart O! cast away thy foolish thought and reason not with thyself, callous girl! No moment shall thee spend with such virtuosity too young! too young! O! but my center breaks where I should hold my heart and in banter with both the appalling and respectable of self I would chasten e’en my heart but! O! To see thy kindest face O Knight, once more in worship’s trance shall I entreat only of you Ah, yes, to take myself o’er blackest hill to yon Wizard and promise O he will ask for much but to give pledge for thy face to come again and Wizard will look deep, and know I mean naught to him, but he will accept the pledge and he will cool the drink and to my lips shall the vial be placed and I will then, sip draught and await the Knight…. 18 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! blessed be me... when the divine rays of the sun shines shines upon me Ah! I say the sequel to the story is a sequel in itself, and the charm sustains Ah! the form of expression choicest, endearing, loving to the eye and mesmerised remain I I remain and so I do... is there a 4 coming up, O poetess of the Ra is there, as I await the next light to come and glow within, and upon this being O poetess of the Ra, is there more divinity to shower, is there? if there be another shower, bless me still bless me more for I seek to bathe my body and soul in the glory of thy poetry the glory of thy verse, the glory of thy divine glow the glory of thy shadow... ---- My regards, sudhir |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I was walking out the door when I decided to hit the "refresh" button one last time just to see what popped up. Oh, I just had to read... and I'm glad I did. I'll be 7 minutes late for work but this was well worth it!!!! *S* -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jaimie, just tell them you were "spell bound"...LOL! Sudhir, OMG, look at what you do...make me smile, and smile, and smile... yes, there will be a four, perhaps a five... we will have to see what Sir Knight does... |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
.....i'm throwing up now....! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
this dream just keeps getting better and better. Thank you for indulging us so quickly and so wonderfully. I will be patient for the 4th and 5th and so on. So please know I thank you for your quick and wonderful wit. Now go enjoy yourself and read some or simply take a breather....you have earned it so well. Lovely verses of haunting melodrama.....addicted I am. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Thank you Mark! I'm following the 'rules' of only posting 3...frustrating, but I'm sure everyone is tired of me now... and yes, there will be a 4, 5,...6 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marcy, don't you just love it when we all get so syrupy!? LOL! Thanks for reading! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Its obvious you put a lot of yourself into this poem, Karilea. The way it flows, and yet it holds onto the pauses. Terrific! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, Michael...hope you enjoy I and II as well... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karilea, you just amaze me more and more with each poem that I read. . . going to find 1 and 2!!!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes, Sven, reading them in order helps...LOL |
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Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Quite the story developing here m'lady! |
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