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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-08-26 06:38 PM


Writing My Own Eulogy


If I were to write my eulogy
‘Twould be an easy task
I’d say she was quite pleasant
And did favors when you asked

She was a loving mother
And true and honest friend
And fulfilled all of her promises
Until the very end

I wouldn’t mention that my day
Sometimes revolved around a whim
That I could hardly keep in mind
The month we’re living in

Or that I usually spent at least
Half of all my days
Searching for my pocketbook
While walking in a daze

That world events were in a world
So far removed from mine
That weather meant the way
The sunlight hit the colombine

That stocks and bonds and politics
Were not my cup of tea
I voted with my heart
And not for Clinton, thankfully

To me a family meeting
Meant chocolate ice cream cones
The doors and windows all ajar
Meant no one was at home

I’d never meantion blaring music
While driving all around
Jon luc Ponte to Rolling Stones
To great Steve Miller sound

And although my voice in truth
Was rather like a scared pig’s squeel
I was really Karen Carpenter
When posed behind my wheel

I didn’t have  framed diplomas
Complete with Magna Cum Laude
What I consider mastered feats
Most people wouldn’t applaud

I was not an intellectual
But had some common sense
And any trouble that arose
Pure Love was my defense

What I have learned came not from books
But men with guts of steel
From the hillsides outside Lima
To the streets of Guayaquil

What I have learned of purpose
Came from mud flats on a bay
Where children woke to carry water
At the break of day

Where life and death were one in one
And mud walls made a home
And the joy of life was in a song
And comfort was unknown

To name the highlight of my life
From all that I recall
Would be seeing my reflection
In a black memorial wall

And there were etched the names of men
Who gave their lives for me
I saw my insignificance
While standing by a tree

I walked alone Atlanta’s streets
I heard the church bells ring
And worshiped in the humble church
Of Martin Luther King

I ran a business, toiled long
And saved a hard earned dime
But my true wealth was surrounding me
Each night at supper time

I wrote some poems there toward the end
But nothing really great
I just had to get on paper
Things inside that couldn’t wait

And I wouldn’t even meantion
All my oddities because
Nobody ever realized how
Disorganized I was

And so to write my eulogy
I think I’d simply say
She was a loving friend and mother
In her living day

Elizabeth Santos

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-08-26 06:45 PM


Will you write mine please....you make you look like the perfect soul...ohhhhh...I guess you really were(or are). ...Beautiful and sweet and just the way I remembered her(you)
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-08-26 06:53 PM


Mark,
I would be glad to write yours and it will be much more impressive than mine.Thank you for your sweet remarks. This was kind of fun to write
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-08-26 07:34 PM


Elizabeth,
Well I see you have a few dragons yourself.
But nothing like mine. There is nothing you write that I don't like. I enjoyed reading this, it reveals many things. For there is a second poem between the lines that is much more interesting.
Love Sy

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-26 07:47 PM


wasn't that fun..we had a death notice challenge once elsewhere and I wrote this for myself....we had to say how we died, also..so here's a litle humour would make a good challenge, though  
~Maureen

New Freedom Gazette .... Saturday June 26, 1999

Death Notices

Maureen /Moonchild

Unfortunately, or so it seems
This child of the moon
Had searched out her dreams

Had left one home, had traveled the world
But met her demise
While  a flag she unfurled

Got tangled up in the lines, to the poles
While stringing the flag
With her name in gold, bold

Was famous she was, for her crafts and deeds
And for helping all those
Who she met in need

But she had searched the world over and only came to
A decision she thought
Would be tried and true blue

Had left all that she earned in her past and released
From her grasp all she knew
All she had, wanting peace

Instead she had chosen, to take that new step
Rejoiced in the chase
And was so full of pep

That she tripped on the rope that would raise up the flag
Wrapped round her feet
'Til her body did drag

As it lifted her up, upside down did she hang
'Til the blood rushed to brain and
Her head and ears rang

No one found her til morning, was swinging in breeze
Her peace she had found
And had not come though with ease

'Twas a morbid and horrible death she did see
And the only regret
That I know was that she

Never did finish that book of her rhymes
That consumed all her minutes
Consumed all her time

Her headstone now reads..."Here Lies One Small Seed
Who Had Wished To Have Helped
All Those Met In Need ...

In Growing And Reaching the Best They Can Be
From Seed To A Flower
She Bloomed Just For Thee"




Sven
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5 posted 2000-08-26 07:53 PM


Superb Elizabeth. . .

Maureen is right. . . this would make an excellent challenge. . . "Write your own eulogy. . ."

Wonderful poem my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2000-08-26 08:16 PM


Sy, I wander what you are reading between the lines, I 'm glad you enjoyed reading this. I found it on my hard drive today and decided to post it

Maureen,I ejoyed reading you death notice. Thanks for posting it

Sven, That would be an interesting challenge. Next time, I'll embellish mine a little bit. Thanks for reading

Liz

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-08-26 08:38 PM


Smiling here Liz! I loved this!    

Check your e-mail shortly  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 08-26-2000).]

Chanson
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8 posted 2000-08-26 08:44 PM


Elizabeth, I am touched. You are a beautiful person, inside and out.  ...chanson~
Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee
9 posted 2000-08-26 08:48 PM


Oh I absolutely loved this!  To live a life concentrated on the things which the world today deems unimportant.  Reading this, I know that this person and I could have been wonderful friends!  

--You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.--

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2000-08-27 01:42 AM


Kit
Thanks for the e-mail. We areindeed two birds of a feather

Chanson,
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it

Tennessee angel,
Thanks for your sweet reply. WE can still be friends

Liz


CocoBaci
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11 posted 2000-08-27 01:51 AM


Elizabeth, I must say I'm impressed!  This is written with your style of finesse and your endearing values which shine thru in your poetry.

Regards,
Coco  

JnR4eva
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12 posted 2000-08-27 02:02 AM


i enjoyed this piece very much...humorous, heartfelt, but what i loved the most was that it was 100% real..or rather im assuming it is real  .  i enjoyed this much..thank you sharing  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- rlt



Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 2000-08-27 12:45 PM


Coco, Your remarks are very warming. This was written in fun but it's just how I would say it. Thank you

JnR4eva, Thanks for the comments. Yes this poem unfortunately is 100% true, but fortunately it is not the whole truth. (I can also sing like Julio Iglesias)
Glad you liked it
Liz

Meadowmuse
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14 posted 2000-08-27 12:53 PM


Remarkable, both the "notice" and the "noticee" ... I shudder to think what mine would read (by the way, what rhymes with Van Morrison??)  

Loved it Liz  

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Denise
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15 posted 2000-08-27 09:24 PM


You are a treasure, Elizabeth! I think you should throw that in there somewhere too!

Love ya
Denise

WhtDove
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16 posted 2000-08-27 11:19 PM


Liz this is superb! I can't say there's anything of yours I've read and haven't liked!

Don't know if I could put my own in words.
Will certainly give me something to think about.

Excellence Liz, Excellence!

<*\\\><

Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus!

LoveBug
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17 posted 2000-08-27 11:40 PM


Oh Liz, you do such a wonderful job of describing yourself, although you don't give all the credit you deserve!   A beautiful piece, my friend.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Paula Finn
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18 posted 2000-08-28 12:47 PM


what a truly wonderful piece and to see soemone who really knows themself...
wayoutwalt
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19 posted 2000-08-28 12:57 PM


this is so moving (back up top o course) moving and o so good yuh i'm glad i saw it for sure!!
oh2beme
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20 posted 2000-08-28 03:26 AM


Elizabeth,
You must be a truly wonderful and down to earth person. Anyone who knows you should consider themselves fortunate.
I enjoyed reading this tremendously!!!!!

Sudhir Iyer
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21 posted 2000-08-28 04:33 AM


ENJOYED THIS I really did....

'a multifaceted genius' that's what you are Liz...

regards,
sudhir

Trew
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22 posted 2000-08-29 11:07 PM


This is superb!  It's pretty amazing, after all of the material and social expectations that we are exposed to, what really and truly remains important to us.  That you should want to be remembered as a loving friend and mother is truly a testament to your heart and soul.  Glad I went looking back!  This was a treat!
Trev.

Elizabeth Santos
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23 posted 2000-08-30 06:36 AM


Now that Trew has brought this back, I noticed so many responses that I missed

Claire,
Thanks , Claire, Let's see, Van Morrison - How about "can worry some"

Denise, Thanks, you are the treasure

Rebecca, Thanks , dear for your kind words

Lovebug, You are so sweet and thank you

Paula, Sometimes it takea along time to know yourself

wayoutwalt, Thank you friend, for bringing this back

Oh2beme. You are so kind, Thank you

Sudhir, I love your embellished praises

Trew, I don't know where you found this, but thank you for rummaging and bringing this back. It allowed me to resond to remarks I hadn't seen. Thank you for your very kind remarks. I appreciate your reading and commenting

Liz

hoot_owl_rn
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24 posted 2000-08-30 09:39 AM


I'm sure that anyone who's had the priveledge of knowing you could say this and a thousand things more Elizabeth, for you are indeed a special person  
susanbartee
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25 posted 2000-08-30 12:16 PM


Elizabeth,  I think your own eulogy was absolutely fantastic.  Full of humor also.  I hope when my time comes, that some humor can be found (I'm sure it won't be a problem).  I lose things all the time and constantly am looking for something.  Loved it.  I'll think about writing my own too.
Effigy
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26 posted 2000-08-30 12:19 PM


Loved it. Great Writing.
Elizabeth Santos
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27 posted 2000-08-30 04:28 PM


Hoot, Thanks so much and it's nice to see you posting again

Susan, Thank you for your comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem. I think everyone should write one so that others know what that individual thinks of himself

Effigy, Thank you very much

Liz


Lucie
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28 posted 2000-08-31 12:35 PM


Oh Elizabeth! I am so happy I got to see this poem before it faded into the passing pages of poetry. It was a lovely poem and made me kind of look at myself in a new light. (yours is brighter)  
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