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Misty Moon (Haiku)
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Misty Moon (Haiku) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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Misty moon in dark With your luminescent glow Caress me with light ~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Angel, this is beautiful!! and let me tell ya, she does!  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Aglow in moonlite caressed by its soft embrace surrounded by mist |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A very beautiful picture you've painted here! Lovely haiku! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Dove, you have a SweeeeeeeeeeeetOneHere Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Lovely! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Rebecca! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ Oh, such beauty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Luminescent poem. loved it. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful Becky!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey Angel girl! I'm glad she does Thanks!Prometheus now why didn't I think of that? I like that one. Thanks for adding! Thanks much Krista! Coco I'm really glad you liked it. I think I changed it more than 5 times before I came up with this. Juls thanks! Glad you liked it so much EagleOne thank you! Denise thank you...I'm glad to see your shining face pop up around here! You're sorely missed!! Marge thanks for the lovely reply Kethry glad you did You be well too!Thanks Sharon! And Maree for reading and telling me your honest thoughts in the making! |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
lovely haiku. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Becky what a beauty this is!!! Such lovely simplicity. Bonnie |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
great irony in this one yuh bathin in the dark o yuh the light o the moon |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
precious and elegant haiku! I really liked. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very lovely and full of tranquility. Love to see more of these from you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Dawn thank you Bonnie I'm glad you enjoyed it Any better way to be bathin' Walt?  Thank you very much sonjes! I appreciate that! Thanks Mark! When I can come up with them, you'll get to see them I don't get as much inspiration as I'd like to. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
absolutely great haiku - need no Dove, need no Dial - need no Irish Spring ~S~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I agree wholeheartedly with the others that this is one lovely haiku! *Peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Most beautiful... regards, sudhir |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Wilfred! So true, no soap or bubbles needed for this Thank you Ruth! Spitfire I'm glad you do. ~Thanks~ Sudhir most thankful! |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
ahhh..very nice and soothing....i am off to bed now...thanx for lending this thought for the night "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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