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Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2000-08-25 11:43 PM

Misty moon in dark
With your luminescent glow
Caress me with light

© Copyright 2000 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2000-08-25 11:47 PM

Hey Angel, this is beautiful!!
and let me tell ya, she does!  

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Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-08-26 12:11 PM

Aglow in moonlite
caressed by its soft embrace
surrounded by mist

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In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-08-26 01:10 AM

A very beautiful picture you've painted here! Lovely haiku!    

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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4 posted 2000-08-26 01:43 AM

Dove, you have a SweeeeeeeeeeeetOneHere


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 08-26-2000).]

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North Carolina
5 posted 2000-08-26 03:10 AM

This is so gorgeous.

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North Carolina
6 posted 2000-08-26 03:11 AM

This is a keeper. I was hoping to come back and add it to my library

[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-26-2000).]

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Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2000-08-26 03:37 AM


"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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8 posted 2000-08-26 06:09 AM

Very nice, Rebecca!


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Florida's Foreverly Shores
9 posted 2000-08-26 08:04 AM

Oh, such beauty !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~

Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
10 posted 2000-08-26 08:18 AM

Luminescent poem. loved it.

Be well

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
11 posted 2000-08-26 09:14 AM

Wonderful Becky!    
Member Rara Avis
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12 posted 2000-08-26 12:05 PM

Hey Angel girl! I'm glad she does   Thanks!

Prometheus now why didn't I think of that? I like that one. Thanks for adding!

Thanks much Krista!

Coco I'm really glad you liked it. I think I changed it more than 5 times before I came up with this.

Juls thanks! Glad you liked it so much  

EagleOne thank you!

Denise thank you...I'm glad to see your shining face pop up around here! You're sorely missed!!

Marge thanks for the lovely reply  

Kethry glad you did   You be well too!

Thanks Sharon! And Maree for reading and telling me your honest thoughts in the making!

Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula
13 posted 2000-08-26 03:20 PM

lovely haiku.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

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New York, USA
14 posted 2000-08-26 03:27 PM

Oh Becky what a beauty this is!!!  Such lovely simplicity.  Bonnie
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TEXAS (it's all big)
15 posted 2000-08-26 10:07 PM

great irony in this one yuh bathin in the dark o yuh the light o the moon
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North Carolina
16 posted 2000-08-27 05:11 PM

precious and elegant haiku!  I really liked.  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
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In the winds of Cherokee song
17 posted 2000-08-27 06:58 PM

Very lovely and full of tranquility.  Love to see more of these from you.
Member Rara Avis
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18 posted 2000-08-27 10:50 PM

Dawn thank you  

Bonnie I'm glad you enjoyed it  

Any better way to be bathin' Walt?  

Thank you very much sonjes! I appreciate that!

Thanks Mark! When I can come up with them, you'll get to see them    I don't get as much inspiration as I'd like to.

Wilfred Yeats
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19 posted 2000-08-28 12:18 PM

absolutely great haiku - need no Dove, need no Dial - need no Irish Spring ~S~

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Glen Hope, PA USA
20 posted 2000-08-28 09:03 AM

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21 posted 2000-08-28 09:38 AM

~I agree wholeheartedly with the others that this is one lovely haiku! *Peace.
Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
22 posted 2000-08-28 09:40 AM

Most beautiful...


Member Rara Avis
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23 posted 2000-08-28 10:36 PM

LOL Wilfred! So true, no soap or bubbles needed for this  

Thank you Ruth!

Spitfire I'm glad you do. ~Thanks~

Sudhir most thankful!  

since 2000-08-07
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Bronx, NY
24 posted 2000-08-29 03:32 AM

ahhh..very nice and soothing....i am off to bed now...thanx for lending this thought for the night  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- rlt

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25 posted 2005-02-07 11:16 AM

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