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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Do Not Do not look at me that way please Do not see into my soul with such ease Do not make me wish for other things Do not wish for me to misplace this ring Do not make your eyes dance with mine Do not laugh so heartily on so little wine Do not grasp my hand so tight Do not make me wish for low lamplight Do not speak to me so silently Do not look at me so loudly I’ve never met a man with eyes so green I’ve never felt an obsession so keen Do not ask Because I would Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
i love this very much...falling for his charms in spite of the heart which is afraid..or perhaps not ready..i enjoyed this much  thanx for sharing "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Such pleaing in this one. Remember, the grass is not always greener on the other side. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
busybee comes playfully and sings into my ear, busybee comes around, busy bee sings a great song What the heck, post them all today... for today I am going to sway in delight... as a reader blessed with divinity ... Great poem, this one too.... WOW again... regards, sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
beware of what you wish for!!! Tempting is the apple, yes? Corinne |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Only you can decide if those green eyes are worth throwing away that ring for...just be sure before you take it off...it dont go back on so easy. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Nothing I can say that those above me haven't said - (but my eyes are blue ~G~) Yes - I know these thoughts (moving my ring round and round my finger) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
oh now this one is hot.... scorched my eyes... (brown) eyes..  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JnR4eva - Fantasy?... Susan...perhaps, perhaps not?... Sudhir...anything to make your day... Corinne...or fiction?... Paula, see above, and laugh...and enjoy... Mr. Yeats, "blue" is good... Reb, yep it's hot, about 104 just now...and brown works well, as well... thank you all! |
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