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The Internet connection |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
There's something very powerful and magical about The Internet Is it a persuation of the mind or is it really what we find from the words spoken with such emotions. Something that we could not get from a speech or even someone could teach, but yet strikes all the right cords. Internet power what a upload for us. Seems to be like a magnetic force that we can not help to be drawn to Like a electric surge that we wouldn't dare want to crash into. Can you feel the words as they cut through your brain, really sounds insane though it be completely valid to us it's just our pilot flying on auto. Man what a ride this poetry adrenaline maybe it's a rush but I really do want to go even deeper like a deep blue abyss waiting for me I must go until I find I reach the shores and that will take awhile. I for one love the Internet You can't go by looks doesn't matter if you cook. Which I hate to do by the way. Doesn't matter if your a beauty or maybe a little fruity O.k well you get my drift It just doesn't matter. Our beauty comes from our poetry We are all a poet in one way or another if we would only open our heart this would make a brand new start. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
How does it make you feel? The internet attraction? |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
nice poem  howdoes it make me feel? the internet attraction? hmm well i would have to say i enjoy it very much. i am allowed to be who i am and not be judged in any other way other than my thoughts and beliefs..my mind and my speech! through the internet i have met many people and i will say that sometimes others have hurt me by the actions that some took whenever i allowed myself to be myself, but if it wasn't for that much, i would have never found my happiness "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
I liked the way you laid it out. The Internet allows you to release your deepest thoughts about how we feel on subjects that we would not say otherwise. Enjoyed the read. Diane Yvonne |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Rosebud1229 You have written it so very well The internet is magical and powerful By writing my nutty fruity crying out loud sins I can see myself better When I first got on a different poetry group Some people were really mean I was crying and hurt But I learned to get stronger I kept searching for a better crowd of people And i have found it here When I first got on the computer My first newsgroup was suicide Because I just wanted to die and still do But sharing my feeling on that group And reading my comment and the others Helped me tremendously to the point Of leaving the group I had enough of my suicidal self And it was time to go on for other clouds I love to see what's in people's head It makes me feel WOW! I am not the only one Who thinks that way I do not write perfect, think perfect But in others that have the love of words Written from the bottom of their heart I have hope Thanks for sharing your magical powerful Magnetic electric flying deep you |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you so much for your replies keep it up each and everyday, we all have things to say that make us smile make us sad but all and all its such a joy and delight makes us open the door that stays shut much to much releases pain and pleasure that otherwise if your like me stays locked up much to often. I enjoy tremendously communicating with people near and far. There's a magic, |
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