Stitch me with sunlight...

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Open Poetry #9

Stitch me with sunlight...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-08-25 01:34 AM

Stitch me with sunlight and dry the blood
Of the open gash...
It’s only a stream that runs in the mud
Of the early spring
When Apollo’s gray hands raise up the lash
And the horses’ hoofs strike vernal ink...

Check out my poetry here:

http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-08-25 09:48 AM

Master, this is superb. Your words and skill always intrigue me.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-08-25 09:53 AM

This is good...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 2000-08-25 04:02 PM

Thank you both, should I try to add more to this or does it stand good on its own?

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-08-25 05:13 PM

I love this...and ya know...it does have the possibility of more...but sometimes that is part of the beauty of something...(at least, I personally like to think so, grinning...)
Beautiful just as it is...or, I'm certain, beautiful with more...Admirable work, Master.

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