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I Rage
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I Rage |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Something in me is in need of killing... Something in me needs to die. some thing nagging unfulfilling... take my soul... silence my cries... rampage--restless, curse of birth-- to know how much worthless is worth... slither, I, embracing earth, drinking sand to quench my thirst-- I rage in search of rest. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
IRATE SERENITY STRIKES POWER CHORD.... AMPLIFIER ATTACHED TO GUITAR BURNS.... EXPLODING THE MYTH OF PEACE AND TRANQUILLITY... excerpts from the disTribune... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Drinking sand to quench my thirst. WOW! I think I need to stand wellback from the power of this poem. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Powerfully written Serenity ... this just screams across the page! Incredible verse!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanks you sudhir, as always you make me smile---thank you Kethry as well. Kit, you too always seem to be there with your generous support--I really appreciate it thanks... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well...I was going to pick out what I like the best about this, but all that'd be left is white space. Powerful, dark, wonderfully written...I'm jealous. jwesley |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
the obvious power and genius of this one is how easily and honestly the author conveys a particular feeling with wich the reader identifies so readily to the point of shouting 'Yes--that's what I mean to say' at its end... resounding applause serenity |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
cope  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Christopher-- NOPE. |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
serenity....I guess you were having a bad day...well that is what this site is used for sometimes.....VENTING!!! Very well done though!!! Great writing..... Just me |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
try punchin the couch a couple hundred times serenity  liked the post, too, btw... Tony |
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