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Weakness |
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Ravenz23 New Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 7 |
Did i appear weak to you? Was that it? Did you think me some gullible innocent creature? Some toy to be tossed around? You don't know me... and you never will. You thought to take me in, make me your puppet. You thought that I should bow down before you, licking, every single droplet of sweat from your body. You thought that I should cower, when you raised your hand. And you must have thought to break me. Let me tell you something, be real quiet, and listen closely. Weakness, is only an illusion. Real strength lies within, where it cant be seen or touched. Do you remember all those times you raped me? Flesh on flesh. Hard and brutal... such violence. Mind to mind, manipulative and cunning, the silent rape. You thought that you had succeeded in capturing my soul. You thought that you had blown out my flame. Let me tell you something, you stupid, little fool... You thought wrong. |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
I can so relate to this with a past partner I once had. He truly thought me weak, but he was very wrong! Turns out, I'm even stronger than I ever thought I was. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"weakness is only an illusion Real strength lies within where it cant be seen or touched" very true, that inner strength is what keeps us going. another great poem ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
my my what a strong and forceful poem...i liked this strength of yours very much...congrats..and welcome to passions  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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